Black Poetry : Random Thoughts

[Hiclass_female]

Thank you Bluewater, Im a BIG fan of yours!

 

[angelicsage]

!

keep your head up sister
everyday is a new day
awake...refreshed
you never have to give in
to anything...not even
melancholy...

nice flow!

 

[blakverb]

Hiclass_female,

Yes. We have all (if we are human) had those types of days. So many words of encouragement have been written already so I'll try not to sound redundant. Sister it is in your blood, your lineage to persevere, too stay strong when your face is closest to the fire. I'm sure you did and will continue to. Just remember when things get to heavy put your obstacles in Gods hands. Lovely piece and definitely felt.

blak

 

[Hiclass_female]

Thank you both for the encouragement....it means alot. I may have to write a pt. 2 now! LOL
Take care!

 

[blaquebutterfli]

it's easy to rely on cliches
on rainy days
stuff i heard people say
about cloudy skies and
silver linings
and we all know nothing's gained by whining
but raging against what we cannot see?
this is a part of our majesty
for only in struggle can we
find divinity
i can't offer rose petal blessings
and saying i understand won't lessen
your agony or indecision
but in this detail is precision
not i alone, but many others
have walked this path
and still we walk further
guided by an eternal god
who somehow doesn't find it odd
to hear creation rage and question
anything everything
and even if you don't hear the answer
immediately
rage again
question once more
for though beaten
you are not defeated
yet