Black Poetry : Random Thoughts

[Siren]

SO, Like here I am awake, when all others in my world are sleep...........nothing exists really but the drone of the clock ticking back and forth..and the immense constraint darkness......So many ideas are vying for dominance in my psyche it's a ridiculous freakshow of thoughts, that come to me wrapped snugly in the colors of different emotions.....blue...red.. ..black....sending my mind in to brilliant kaleidoscope of colors that could match the city skyline.....sleep is calling my name but The GRUEL commands and demands I remain......AWAKE....

 

[$$RICH$$]

mental thinking keep us awake for the true reality .....well felt sis

 

[cherryblossom]

SO, Like here I am awake, when all others in my world are sleep...........nothing exists really but the drone of the clock ticking back and forth..and the immense constraint darkness......So many ideas are vying for dominance in my psyche it's a ridiculous freakshow of thoughts, that come to me wrapped snugly in the colors of different emotions.....blue...red.. ..black....sending my mind in to brilliant kaleidoscope of colors that could match the city skyline.....sleep is calling my name but The GRUEL commands and demands I remain......AWAKE....

Whew, sistah, I SO felt this down to my soul!

Fabulous descriptive language in this! The imagery and the emotion are both so palpable!

 

[asimplepoet]

way to capture that moment of randomness of thought that we all have. this was

 

[Siren]

Thanks guys