Black Poetry : Random Thoughts (part 2)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Apr 11, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she sat in a different dimension....
    the wyne that she sipped settled in her stomack
    made her breathe e.z...

    calm....she stared into the space...
    endless....
    it seemed like the road ahead...
    forced scars into her soul...
    yet she was content
    with what lied behind it...

    peace....
    she wanted someone to massage her mental
    with a chorus that would relax her soul...
    sometymea thoughts would become
    deep....

    a young poets soul would die one day
    because the mental massacre that has
    plagued his race...

    dizzy...
    maybe one day she would be free...
    for now her only refuge was something
    she could roll in paper...

    she could walk on water then...
    and fly on clouds...
    tear the earth, and focus on its core...
    what was inside Solomans Grave...
    and why the hell he had soo many women...

    when she died she had decided she would bust heavens
    gate W...I...D...E open...
    lol...the celestial beings would love her...
    and wonder why she thought of such things....

    (hey yall i know this probably doesn't make any sense to yall but hey what can i say i was just ramblin...lol)


    P.S (oh and part 1 is wwwaayyy back somewhere in the archives u probably wont be able to find it without looking into my archives, just in case u're wondering where the hell part one is...)
    -story

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  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very nice story
    enjoyed this read
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u go gurl love the flow on dis
     
  4. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's official!
    I'm gonna adopt you as my little sister!!!!!
    So young and so much depth...amazing.
    I've been liking your flows for a long time now.
    This flow is just another reason why

    Keep flowing lil sis


    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We get this, the story, flowing with serenity and wonder, and having heaven accept the beauty of it all, such a wonderful flow.
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol thanks for the love yall...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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