Black Poetry : Random Thoughts

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  1. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes I sit and question
    The type of spirit I have as a person
    Situations of everyday life...worsens
    Lord, I know you won’t put more on me than I can bear
    But every other day
    I’m throwing my hands in the air
    I don’t see life any other way but inequitable
    Most say I’m inconceivable
    And I can handle whatever comes my way
    When in actuality...I can't stand to see another day
    How can I be strong,
    When I can’t right this wrong?
    Pessimism flying from every direction
    It’s hard to keep an optimistic erection
    When my inner self in gradually sinking into misery
    Not yet melancholy
    But it will happen.......
    Probably.
     
  2. PositiveMindset

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    Even though it may seem as if there's no answers to your problems, know that the omniscient one has already solved them.

    It's just a rite of passage to see if you'll stand tall or collapse under the pressure.

    Stay strong and let the ropes hold you up until you have enough strength to fight back.

    Peace.
     
  3. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RIGHT ON!

    you right,
    this is far past due.
    i'm feeling this flow,
    cuz i know where you coming from is where i once was too..........
     
  4. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you guys. Things arent always good and this was one of those days where I couldnt write about love and happiness, etc. But everything is cool, this was just to let people know....I have problems too just like the next person....
     
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    you got to keep on goin on...
    it may seem the cloud have
    covered and your way is at a end....
    but you my dear...you got to keep on...
    the storm may be hard..and
    the starz you cant reach...
    but you keep on goin on....
    you may get tired..but in
    his time...
    all will be release...and
    you will see thy light..
    for it may be overwhelmin
    but everything gets alright...
    see i can write this coz
    i been there.....
    hold your strength in him..
    he will guide you and hold your hand....
    never leave you..but a test of time
    will always be there...
    but my dear....you got to keep on
    just know and :angel1:was here...
     
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    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sit here in my solitude feeling alone
    I feel like I’m a prisoner in my own mind…my only home
    I’m sitting here feeling the consequence of simply living
    Trying to understand in my mind but I cant cuz even my heart dont comprehend.
    I’m losing all sight of my being...I look at my self in the mirror
    I only see a foreigner...who am I?
    I am dead and yet I am alive
    simply existing in the shadow of what I once was
    Not knowing what will become of me
    I am at a lost for thoughts and feelings but words continuously float through my mind
    Confusion sprouts from the deepest crater of my being and get lost in the whirlpool of perplexion

    I prayed to God" lord take me now" and woke up disappointed that I was able to move and open my eyes
    The desire to end my existence grows ever more vividly in my hear and I’m not sure that I can fight the urge to take my life within mine own hands
    "lord take me now"
    *I Know I didn't help but i feel the same way right now so I thought I would drop a reply
     
  7. adefinitediva

    adefinitediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, I really dig this flow. Say you're located in MS by way of AL? I, too, am in the 'Sip. What part?
     
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    i feel like this at times...

    but keep praying n keep fighting and a change is bound to come. its just a test of times. nice flow.
     
  9. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you guys. PoeticallySpeakin, thank you for the encouraging words.
    MsDiva, Im orginally from alabama, I just moved to Pascagoula, MS a yr ago.
    thank you for your kinds words too!.
     
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    feeling you on this
    always ask question
    even if it is only to yourself you ask them
    this is nice
    Peace
     
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