Black Poetry : Random Thoughts of Romantic Warrior

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  1. Omowale Jabali

    Omowale Jabali The Cosmic Journeyman PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Once i was lost
    then thought i found,
    till love evaded my grasp
    now i feel like
    i've just been a clown.
     
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    I do feel you here brotha. But don't give up, there are sisters who do appreciate a good man, a man whose word means something, a man of substance. When we feel ourselves wanting, it is hard I know. Peace.
     
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    deep and felt but bruthas good will last and pass the test
    above the rest , stay in the fight and surely ya just do love
    will be rewarded. Awesome drop nice to read you and the mind set u bring poeticly
     
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    keep ya head up, Brother Omo,,,,stay real and to thine own self be true....

    ...i love that piece, simple, to the point...almost zenlike
     
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    well my romantic warrior you dont have to look far. nice flow.
     
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    sometimes we overlook a diamond in its roughest form. if you take the time to clean it a beautiful diamond will appear. :heart:
     
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    Sistas deal with the same syndrome... yes I can feel..
    Beautiful
    D.S.
     
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    Like a passion ride
    You came from above
    All I had to do was
    Keep my faith

    A door closed
    Another opened
    And you were
    .... standing right there
    And now our dream
    Have come alive

    Once you were lost
    But you found me
    I grasped as you reached

    The dream you once dreamed
    Is still alive little do you realize
    Hearts meet
    And souls connected
    Love is the dream of all
    And the desire burns within

    This sister right here
    Love you…

    Now….

    Lets take this spiritual ride
    Not as two
    But……


    One

    Peace
    Angel:heart:
     
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    Hi omowalwjabali
    I could feel the deep opening
    that poured from the heart
    in your poem
    what does it take
    what does it take
    to wake from a
    dream
    that's deferred,

    maybe as you said
    To
    Risk The Peace
    very nice

    Peace
     
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    My love….
    You opened the door
    Of tomorrow for me
    As this new life begins
    My love comes down
    Dancing as one
    In this sweet love romance
    That I want to last
    You can count on my love
    Don’t hesitate
    Just reach
    ….as I reach for you

    A burning desire
    That puts my soul on fire
    You know about love
    That is not my fear
    As we begin to share
    Forever more is here

    You have became the wind beneath
    …my wings
    My summer in winter
    My spring my new beginning
    You are my love

    I may not be perfect
    I have my ups and downs
    Only because I am human
    But it don’t mean
    …I don’t love you
    As we grow as one
    We learn together

    Let’s just break this down….
    Communication with
    Mental stimulation
    Don’t close it
    Feeling an electric liberation
    Of a vibration called love
    You’re my sunshine
    After my midnight
    Knowing love was not for me
    My faith pulled me through
    And you were there
    To extend your hand…
    By chance on first sight
    I took your hand
    I knew you were my light
    Drown to you
    Like a bee to honey…

    One door closed….
    ….but
    Another door opened
    And there you were
    Standing like a beam of light
    Joy comes every morning
    I rest much better at night
    Knowing you care….
     
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