Black Poetry : I'm sick of cheesy pick up lines

[asimplepoet]

This was on point and well scripted way to get them told. great drop my sis

 

[MRS. LADY]

thank you my beautiful sisters....

much love and respect....

 

[garlicsalt99]

mortal men they are so blind
try to kick it all the time
hit you wit them lame a** lines
like valentines the say be mine

they say they want what's in between
man just state ur case, say what u mean
it's about my temple that you dream
and then it's ME who is unclean!

me, i know what i hold is hot
I'll show u how to touch my spot
obviously it's you that wants what I got
sneaky, freaky think you so smart

pick up lines those lustful quotes
make me wan karate chop ur throat
you think you can handle this but nope
I'm just too complicated for the average men-folk

walk away wit ya blue eyed gaze
you'll never figure out this mind of maze
I'm only looking for better days
and the sprout of life thru sun rays

and my most beautiful brothers
with that mouth.. would you kiss ur mother
treat me as she... as if I weren't another
and then maybe just maybe u can b my lover

One must wonder sometimes what ever happened to common sense
For some of the things said by some brothas' show misguided arrogance
Navigating waters that sinks 'em everytime without recompense
And some of the things said, really shows a lack of confidence
Whatever happened to being yourself for a woman to get to know
Engaging in the art of conversation, and at times taking it slow
I guess everyone wants to be a playa' and try to spit a line
Not realizin' that a real playa' doesn't need a pick up line

From the real brothas to the real sistas ... Peace.

 

[MRS. LADY]

One must wonder sometimes what ever happened to common sense
For some of the things said by some brothas' show misguided arrogance
Navigating waters that sinks 'em everytime without recompense
And some of the things said, really shows a lack of confidence
Whatever happened to being yourself for a woman to get to know
Engaging in the art of conversation, and at times taking it slow
I guess everyone wants to be a playa' and try to spit a line
Not realizin' that a real playa' doesn't need a pick up line

From the real brothas to the real sistas ... Peace.

now this one makes me smile.....

the real sistahs love the real brothas....

all de tyme!!

 

[MrAdams]

re; hi

good-afternoon Miss Lady,


just chilling, etc...


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pick up lines those lustful quotes
make me wan karate chop ur throat
you think you can handle this but nope
I'm just too complicated for the average men-folk
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the above lines got me smiling, as sadly these days neither sex truly knows how to court thy other... what i'm saying to many of us are trying to be players instead of seeking out TRUE LOVE... actually wanting to settle down with thy other half which shall be one's SOUL MATE... still thy flow is the norm now, as who hasn't tried to pimp with corny lines believing a sister is going to fall for that crap... in summary your style is original young lady, so continue to give birth to masterpieces...


have a nice day...

sincerely,
c.t.adams-///