Black Poetry : I'm sick of cheesy pick up lines

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    mortal men they are so blind
    try to kick it all the time
    hit you wit them lame a** lines
    like valentines the say be mine

    they say they want what's in between
    man just state ur case, say what u mean
    it's about my temple that you dream
    and then it's ME who is unclean!

    me, i know what i hold is hot
    I'll show u how to touch my spot
    obviously it's you that wants what I got
    sneaky, freaky think you so smart

    pick up lines those lustful quotes
    make me wan karate chop ur throat
    you think you can handle this but nope
    I'm just too complicated for the average men-folk

    walk away wit ya blue eyed gaze
    you'll never figure out this mind of maze
    I'm only looking for better days
    and the sprout of life thru sun rays

    and my most beautiful brothers
    with that mouth.. would you kiss ur mother
    treat me as she... as if I weren't another
    and then maybe just maybe u can b my lover
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    guys kill with all time

    be real about it

    or maybe they can't be

    real man don't holla like that

    kids do

    lol
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    lol.... hey u...

    someone said something today that I don't even care to repeat..... man I gave him an EARFULL!!! he musta apologized a million times... but wow... sometimes men just don't think about the things that they say to a lady!!!!!!
     
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    especially

    to a MISS LADY

    they have no idea who they're talking

    but i do
     
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    Some foul mouths need reminding, and a wake up call besides. Some sadly will never awaken. Posed on point.
     
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    This was on point and well scripted way to get them told. great drop my sis
     
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    thank you my beautiful sisters....

    much love and respect....
     
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    One must wonder sometimes what ever happened to common sense
    For some of the things said by some brothas' show misguided arrogance
    Navigating waters that sinks 'em everytime without recompense
    And some of the things said, really shows a lack of confidence
    Whatever happened to being yourself for a woman to get to know
    Engaging in the art of conversation, and at times taking it slow
    I guess everyone wants to be a playa' and try to spit a line
    Not realizin' that a real playa' doesn't need a pick up line

    From the real brothas to the real sistas ... Peace.
     
  9. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    now this one makes me smile.....

    the real sistahs love the real brothas....

    all de tyme!!
     
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    re; hi

    good-afternoon Miss Lady,


    just chilling, etc...


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    pick up lines those lustful quotes
    make me wan karate chop ur throat

    you think you can handle this but nope
    I'm just too complicated for the average men-folk
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    the above lines got me smiling, as sadly these days neither sex truly knows how to court thy other... what i'm saying to many of us are trying to be players instead of seeking out TRUE LOVE... actually wanting to settle down with thy other half which shall be one's SOUL MATE... still thy flow is the norm now, as who hasn't tried to pimp with corny lines believing a sister is going to fall for that crap... in summary your style is original young lady, so continue to give birth to masterpieces...


    have a nice day...

    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
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