Black Poetry : Sick Love....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DesiredEpiphany, Jul 27, 2006.

  1. DesiredEpiphany

    DesiredEpiphany New Member MEMBER

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    This is very complicated….
    And as much as I hate it…
    I feel the need to keep my feelings subdued…
    And continuously deny that I'm falling in love with you….
    Seems to me like life is just one big lesson….
    Not to be enjoyed or savored, so why am I stressin??

    You should come with a sign…..a warning…. a disclaimer….a label reading...
    F**KING WITH CAN BE DETRIMENTAL TO YOUR STATE OF BEING….
    Let me tell you what your state of being has led me to perceive:

    Your kind of love is deathly and sick, you're toxic….
    Compassion is something that you lack….
    I have to go and leave you be if I want the remainder of my heart intact
    You're corruptive with your touch
    Damaging and rough….
    You're Virulent to the soul….
    Malicious and cold….
    A fuming mass of poisonous gas…
    Follows
    every
    where
    you
    go…...........

    You so lovingly fed me your deceit and ******** masked in sugar and sweet cream….
    But such bitterness and foul thickness was too obvious to go unseen
    How and why I'm still here, I often question myself
    You should've come with a second label
    F**KING WIT COULD BE DETRIMENTAL TO YOUR HEALTH
    CARCINOGENIC LOVER, HAZARDOUSE, IF U'RE HEART IS IMMERGED IMMEDIATELY FLUSH

    Did you think I wouldn't see through your games and everything would remain hush hush?


    Let me break it down for you so that I am sure to make myself clear…
    I'm not in the business of dating around and screwing there and here…
    I can be anyones whore but not everyones woman….
    And once I am claimed and honored…I can keep dat *** cummin….
    But to lay with you and please you, that’s a whores duty
    They come lay with you and tease you sharing all that public tainted booty
    Whispering sweet nothings and bull**** in your ear…
    Tellin you **** that your ego loves to hear…
    This is the job of a classified whore
    But in me babygirl, you'll find so much more…
    See, I'm a WOMAN who is looking to be kept
    And you have made it quite clear that this is not a task you are willing to accept

    Take care baby girl…..the love in my heart for you will always exist…but I can't and won't allow myself to be your option while I continue to make you my priority.
     
  2. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wowwww..that was....excellent...very intense...

    i feel you....i dont even know what else to say...

    wow
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now see, sometimes when I'm fuming I tend to ramble, but not you, this was a direct hit. Yes, it's a daggone shame some folk don't come with a warning sign. Potent scribe.
     
  4. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A warning label... I feel you.
    Can truely relate.
    Flo on wit yo baad self.

    Much Luv
     
  5. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok so why is your disclaimer still messing me up. You brought the fire girl, I'm still reeling from the heat!
     
  6. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    This was very deep and i was feelin every word. Nice flow.:)

    AM
     
  7. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HMMMM LABELS HUH WELL WELL WELL I COULD ONLY WISH THAT THE ONE MY EPISODE JUST ENDED WITH HAD LABELS IT WOULD HAVE SAVED ME A LOT OF HEART ACHE , DEGRIDATION, AND PAIN I FEEL THIS COMPLETELY

    WELL WELL WRITTEN SCRIBE
    MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesomely done poet
     
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