Black Poetry : freestyle..lol.ya gone laugh i did

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Nov 11, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dont ask i was just writtin it may not even make no sense :angel1:
    its called my pen dry...

    Let me in yo mind..
    To intertwine in yo thoughts…
    Fasten yo seat belt…
    Fo dis ride is about to
    Take off..
    In flight…lol
    You will reach new heights
    And see different sights
    Of da mystic magical..wonder
    Dream maker..
    Dat mesmerize ya..
    Have ya speakin
    Tongue just about in every
    Language…
    What comes up must come down..
    Feelin like ya been freshly dip…
    If you cant handle whats going on…
    Move on….
    Freestylein..hehe..blackangel way…
    Don’t get shock coz my mic is hook up..
    Hit da flo I gots the beat dat make
    ya wiggle do a little dance..
    have ya in trance..i am the dream maker..
    have a scream makin you
    wish I come to yo dream..i don’t fake no moves aiiright…
    just come to my groove...lol
    But right now I am only micophone talking..
    Nothing deep just playin in my flow…
    I am from da old skool…I don’t toss and floss
    I keep it real…doin my thang..
    word play is the thing I like to do..
    twisted up turn it around..
    go get the dictionary…
    have ya wonder why..
    thinking ya high//seein doubles..
    I don’t sling fling or bling…
    dayum why cant she act her age..
    check I don’t even drink but got plenty..
    nicotine…not tryin ta be cute..
    da Angel is always on point..
    hair nails and dress to kill….
    Cell phone in hand..doing my thang…
    Stayin true to this rhyme thang I do
    Ok Ok….I am killin myself with this..
    I gots to stop….lol :uzi:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    poetic word play from da mental
    what seem funny is a masterpiece
    as we laugh it's written in ink
    as it drip caressin da page

    nice off ya head .....flow on !
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my pen is so dry ok i was writtin and my mind blink out...
    and this what was left..but thanks fo da read... :angel1:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh yes
    this is vibing
    loving this piece
    Peace
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh thanks blue your such a sweetie..
    glad ya like it... :angel1:


    i try to do better with next post
    mind just went...lol
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Free as free can be... you shine in this piece!
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo da read
     
  8. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HAHA I likes I likes, that was tight.
     
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    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like your diverse flow
    freestyling is an art form
    thats actually how i write
    i spit whatever comes to the brain and the ends seem to sound the same
     
  10. FloeticFire

    FloeticFire Active Member MEMBER

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    I heard

    You know I heard herbal remedies help folks write like this.

    Helluva play on words, and great scribe

    Peace Queen
     
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