Quiet Poetry Lounge : FREESTYLE FOR SINGLE MOMMA'S!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Dec 9, 2007.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    All the years and all the tears I thought you'd never walk out on me
    Now your gone, and what went wrong
    But, you don't have no answers for me

    I stand all alone, lost soul in the world
    I'm thinkin way back to boy meeting girl
    Exhaled too soon, you opened my wounds
    Now I'm with child and sentenced to doom

    Nine months on eternity
    With you always hurting me
    Holding on so tight
    Hoping that you'll learn to be

    A man, that man that I never had
    But each and every day you look more like my dad
    In and out, here and there, when he left I was glad
    Your an instant replay of a childhood gone bad

    Vicious cycle will contiue, as long as I am with you
    Should have listened to my momma when she said forget you
    If I wanna save my son I gotta find a way to ditch you
    But every time I leave you, my heart tells me that I miss you

    What to do? What to do? Do I love you or leave?
    Can't stay, gotta go, cause you make my heart bleed!

    But you dropped me at the clinic, wanted me to dead our kid
    But GOD was on my side, telling me to let him live
    Who the f*** are you to deny him his life
    You ain't gotta be his daddy, I ain't gotta be your wife

    But, you loved me strong when you where down
    Now your not around
    Came up out the storm but you left me there to drown
    Forced me into the slavery of manning a home
    And now your all pissed off that I can do it on my own
    Single moms, working hard, yo that wasn't GOD'S plan
    I am WOMAN, hear me roar but you force me to be a man.

    Little man growing up, and he's looking like you
    His birthday coming up and of course the rent is due
    He asked me where you were, and I wish that I knew
    So I could tell you I'm a better person and I owe that all to you
    From all the b****** and the lies, denyin ya seed
    And what makes it worst then that is that you made me beleive
    That we would always be together, always and forever
    So why don't you tell me how always turns to never
    You say your a different person and my answer is whatever
    Father of my love child we can never be together

    Cause all the years and all the tears I need a man to ease my fears
    And what I know for sure is that man ain't you
    Little man, I love him strong
    But yo me -n- u are through!

    sorry ya'll ... read the rules... am i posting too much... i'm done for now.. just felt like sharing 2day.. please be patient with me....
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All single mom's have a song to sing, and yours sang out loudly and proudly. When someone does us wrong, the wrong deed doesn't instantly erase that love. makes it even more dificult to make the right decision. Potent piece.

    Miss Lady, in the "Get Your Flow On" poetry forum you're allowed to have a total of 5 pieces on the front page, so you're fine. We've all had those times when our pens just wouldn't run out of ink. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt the depth of a single mom's song
     
  4. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    up

    this is gon get laid down on a track...

    are u guys feelin this one????

    most single mommas say it give em chills...

    but when I put something down FINALLY....

    it's all gon be gear'd toward the sistahs....

    we fight so much that we need to unite big time...

    how many of ya'll know a bunch of chick that fight over the same raggedy dude????

    you thoughts...... are all welcomed........

    and remember I like blunt honesty.....
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    actually i see you said you read the rules

    but it's not like your posting and NOT spreading ANY love like others on this page

    5 is the limited, but sometimes it's hard to track because sometimes the page might move slow

    but we thank you for the respect REAL TALK

    it's actually a pleasure to see your fire

    and I GIVE HIGH PRAISE AND RESPECT TO SINGLE MOMS

    it's not easy i bow in your presence

    and ML you have to let it out somehow somewhere

    and i'm glad you did it here

    with your CYBERPHAM

    peace from BK
     
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