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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Struggling to express
    The joy you bring
    The sheer happiness
    you emit to everything....

    Your name should be Midas,
    cause every heart you touch
    turns to pure gold, it glimmers,
    your intensity is almost too much.
    A vision in and of yourself
    You're a sight for sore eyes,
    a treasure hoard of jewels, a precious
    discovery held under your guise.
    A king worthy of the crown
    leading an earthly realm
    the fleet won't veer out of course
    with you at the helm.
    Continue to steer me in a trance
    I willingly fall under your spell
    leading unto the eternal abyss of
    the never ending bliss I long to tell.
    And I would
    If I could
    But I'm still,
    struggling to express...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what seem a hold back is only a myth
    unto the struggling thoughts forth the
    release was made long ago flow on i
    hear ya
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I suppose then, I am truly heard more than I realize, and that always makes a poet happy. Thank you for your support Rich, it means so much.
     
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    Bravo bravo,,
    that was very nice.
    I like that piece a lot.
    Nice flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you liked the flow thatgirl74, thank you. Hope you're enjoying being part of this family at destee.
     
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    indeed when u think no one listening that's when u heard the most
     
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    very nice sister
    wonderful drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you very much sista Bluewater.

    ...and I still wonder
    were my words clear
    did they explain the depth of those
    feelings that I held so dear
    Do the words I express now, even
    hold a candle to what I know inside
    Or, does he merely think, it's not true
    and that I have stammered and lied
    When I hold an eternity of passion
    how could he see it as being anything less
    When I'm struggling to express...
     
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    I enjoyed this piece.

    even though it invoked a feeling of sadness when I read it.

    :heart:
     
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    Hi Sis
    Wow.. he has the touch that
    special touch that brings to
    US the flow of love
    Very awesome poem sis.
    I enjoyed the nice feeling
    Yes indeed

    Peace~N~Love
     
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