Quiet Poetry Lounge : Struggling to Express

[watzinaname]

Struggling to express
The joy you bring
The sheer happiness
you emit to everything....

Your name should be Midas,
cause every heart you touch
turns to pure gold, it glimmers,
your intensity is almost too much.
A vision in and of yourself
You're a sight for sore eyes,
a treasure hoard of jewels, a precious
discovery held under your guise.
A king worthy of the crown
leading an earthly realm
the fleet won't veer out of course
with you at the helm.
Continue to steer me in a trance
I willingly fall under your spell
leading unto the eternal abyss of
the never ending bliss I long to tell.
And I would
If I could
But I'm still,
struggling to express...

 

[$$RICH$$]

what seem a hold back is only a myth
unto the struggling thoughts forth the
release was made long ago flow on i
hear ya

 

[watzinaname]

I suppose then, I am truly heard more than I realize, and that always makes a poet happy. Thank you for your support Rich, it means so much.

 

[thatgirl74]

Bravo bravo,,
that was very nice.
I like that piece a lot.
Nice flow

 

[watzinaname]

Glad you liked the flow thatgirl74, thank you. Hope you're enjoying being part of this family at destee.