Quiet Poetry Lounge : Struggling

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ShyOne617, Oct 4, 2003.

  1. ShyOne617

    ShyOne617 New Member MEMBER

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    Struggling

    Struggling to understand why you would leave like you did
    Struggling to maintain my sanity in the mist of all this confusion
    Struggling to keep my composure and not go upside your head
    Serenity, tranquility gone replaced with turmoil, chaos

    Struggling not to take my disappointment out on family and friends
    Struggling not to call to find out if the problem lies within me or was it you
    Struggling not to let this pain consume my being
    Serenity, tranquility gone replaced with turmoil, chaos

    Struggling still trying to keep you out of my mind
    Struggling not to let you know how deep you have hurt me, heart wrenching hurt, to the very core of my being hurt
    Struggling always Struggling, thought it was over when I meet you
    Serenity, tranquility gone replaced with turmoil, chaos
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep
    feeling the emotion
    in your scribe
    let the flow pour
    much love
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt of emotions flowin
    wondering why !!!!
    tyte scribe
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to Destee, my friend. :wave:

    I am feeling your flow and look forward to seeing more from you.
     
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    feelin the emotions like the flow...
     
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    you are definitely not alone... Feelin' your flow.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Goodness knows I've felt this pain before, Shyone. You've definately got company.
     
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    Ayaatee Active Member MEMBER

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    very nice and heart felt!
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ShyOne,
    You did this one a little while back and i don't know if you are still around cause i see you've only dropped 4; but you poetically projected struggling in this poem. Good job.

    Peace and Blessings,
     
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