Black Poetry : Sincere Souls Struggling to See

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rasheed, Jan 12, 2004.

  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The True Way is simple and pure
    It leads straight way to all that is clear
    And only it is accepted by its Creator
    We'll all see it sooner or later
    It is not African only nor only European
    It is for each and every human being
    Who chooses straight up surrender to the Divine One's Will
    Untainted by what we concoct and feel
    It's name in English is The Surrender
    It contains no disrespect for either gender
    The name in Arabiyah is Al-Islam
    Authored by the all encompassing "I Am"
    Some humans make up their own ways and argue and debate
    About what will all be cleared up for them, just you wait
    Even if you can't wait and keep pressing for what you believe
    The Truth is here manifested and your salvation you must achieve
    By submitting your will to the Will of The One
    Who has the Last say both now and when all of this is done
    Too many words can make noise and clutter and hide reality
    Sometimes from sincere souls just struggling to see.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes yes yes
    feeding the mind
    as you flow
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely pose'd feeling dis in da mental
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blue, Thanks to you; to flow and reach and teach sometimes along the way that makes my day.

    RICH, Thanks, your comment makes me feel i'm reaching my intended poetic aims
     
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    it always feels good to live by what u believe is true
    im feelin this flow
    thats some real talk
    KEEP WRITING AND I'LL KEEP READING
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flow on poet of the week teach da wisdom
     
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    Our conscience speaks loudly, sometimes we just choose not to listen. Hearing you on this, keep flowing poet of the week.
     
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