Black Poetry : struggling to be a man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Apr 7, 2003.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling cynical
    i've already been clinical
    so now i can step back and watch
    all of the hustle and all of the game
    the ego tripping
    the words dripping
    from your lips as sweet as honey
    about what you want to do to me
    release yourself into me
    my beauty
    my confidence and aggression
    sex and spice are a secret weapon
    but you aren't that fine
    and your words aren't that hypnotic
    it's like excuse me while i hurl
    cause i hear the ******** and my top lip curls
    i am a grown *** woman
    and you are lame if you think i'd really fall for your game
    and i scare you to say the least
    cause i'm the craziest kind of freak
    blow your mind cause the sex is so good
    but in reality i'm just misunderstood
    you're steady fu*k*in and i'm steady makin' love
    the push and pull it's messin' up the air
    loving and fu*k*in it's so unfair
    and then you try to act all cold
    because you think you have a hold
    still you are confused
    you wanna be a mac
    but you are married
    you wanna be a playa
    but you have children
    you wanna be cold
    but you have a heart
    and i see that
    that's the REAL scary part
    so i speak on it and you run
    all the wet coochie in the world hon
    can't make you have some basic decorum
    let's watch you sweat inside this forum
    like i said
    i've already been clinical
    but now i'm just cynical
    and i sit back and watch you struggle
    with how to be a man
     
  2. MsMercy

    MsMercy Member MEMBER

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    like i said
    i've already been clinical
    but now i'm just cynical
    and i sit back and watch you struggle
    with how to be a man

    I like how you took it from the front to the back, i liked that poem. very real and easy to follow and relate to...men are very interesting creatures. :geek:

    peace and blessings,
    mercy
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QUOTE of the day...

    all the wet coochie in the world hon
    can't make you have some basic decorum-
     
  4. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ms. mercy, 1 poet - thank you for feeling my flow...
     
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    being a man
    instead
    of a
    d!ckhead
    to stand
    on your morales
    instead
    of bending to the trend
    is a decision that for the
    weak
    is very
    bleak

    to mean what
    you speak
    intead
    of lying
    in stacks and heaps
    is a choice that
    many fall to defeat

    to with your woman
    and to keep bringing the heat
    instead of
    finding other places to sleep
    is what seperates
    men
    from
    sheep

    i felt the eastcoast flavor on this one red
    peace
    khasm
     
  6. UPTOWNE

    UPTOWNE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DAG baby why ya call the BROTHA out LIKE that its like that GARY COOPER MOVIE ya know the one "HIGH NOON" YOU playing GARY COOPER waitin for the PUNK to show UP then ya KILL HIM yeah just like in the MOVIES ha ha ha ha ha ha........... SO YA GONNA SHOW PUNK? I am waitin in the SALOON RED TELL ME WHEN YOUR PUNK SHOWS UP..... ha ha ha ha ha ha
     
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    **** girl. It's like this: you were flowin whats been on my mind since i discovered ignorant men. I loved your flow

    1 LOVE
    -Swtness
     
  8. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm - Speak on it! You get it! Thank you.

    Cindy - You always read my work, I appreciate that sis!

    Uppie - Be quiet now - yeah, the punk showed up and had to get shot down. Tumble weeds were blowing around his dirty rotten carcas! hahahahaha

    SwtT - There are some men that are a real trip, but hopefully they will grow up to be men of quality (someday!)
     
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