Black Poetry : It's the God in me

[MRS. LADY]

this is good but ur marking urself

It's the God in me​

That you see​

For there's be no me​

If there was no Almighty​

What you see on this day​

Is only cause God had HIS way​

For my life was going awry​

Until I surrender and gave God a try​

HE took my lil bit of nothing​

Combined it with HIS something​

And made me capable of anything​

In the process of giving me everything​

Today you see the picture that is worth taking​

But getting here was a long process of remaking​

For I am truly a God designed work in progress​

And it's only with HIS grace that I am a success​

When you see me flying high through the sky​

God is the wind beneath my wings helping me fly​

I achieve because I am a reflection of my creator​

It is with God in me that I am able to be greater ​

All that I am is attributed to the Almighty​

If there was not a God there would be no me​

all that i am is attributed to the almighty (this a five count) ur actually givin glory to "man"

if there was not a god there would be no me (11)

u just said if it wasn't for man there would be no god...


LEARN HOW TO PRAY!!!!

no disrespect intended, but ur intent is not ur own

 

[asimplepoet]

all that i am is attributed to the almighty (this a five count) ur actually givin glory to "man"

if there was not a god there would be no me (11)

u just said if it wasn't for man there would be no god...


LEARN HOW TO PRAY!!!!

no disrespect intended, but ur intent is not ur own

No disrespect taken because I am open-minded. But I would love for you to expound upon the above because I don't understand where you coming from

 

[MRS. LADY]

No disrespect taken because I am open-minded. But I would love for you to expound upon the above because I don't understand where you coming from

when you write your presenting your soul to god and the world

what i said although u accept what i've said with no disrespect, it did hurt your feelings, so for that i do apologize..

the worse thing any writer can do is learn format and structure

since it comes from the female element creativity it is not structured or formatted it is pure soul and emotion

I wrote a thread entitled Ancient Information - it breaks it down a lil

u know how they say "music calms a savage beast" .... it's the count, the beat, it shows how ur heart beats if u will

prayers are the same -

you'll get it because your willing to receive

^^ 11 count (divine female element blessings only)

 

[MRS. LADY]

All that i am is Attributed (9)
If there was not a god there would be no me (11)

If there was not a god there would be no me

All that I am is Attributed

11 on top
9 below

now it reads idea of goddess (if there was not a god there would be no me)
All that i am is attibuted (complete 9 god is i am, and attributes come from idea female 11)


this way it expresses the need for both to create....