Black Poetry : It's the God in me

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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's the God in me

    That you see

    For there's be no me

    If there was no Almighty


    What you see on this day

    Is only cause God had HIS way

    For my life was going awry

    Until I surrender and gave God a try


    HE took my lil bit of nothing

    Combined it with HIS something

    And made me capable of anything

    In the process of giving me everything


    Today you see the picture that is worth taking

    But getting here was a long process of remaking

    For I am truly a God designed work in progress

    And it's only with HIS grace that I am a success


    When you see me flying high through the sky

    God is the wind beneath my wings helping me fly

    I achieve because I am a reflection of my creator

    It is with God in me that I am able to be greater


    All that I am is attributed to the Almighty

    If there was not a God there would be no me
     
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    And, indeed, it is the God in you! I see it in you and feel it from you.


    Exquisite piece, ASP! You are truly blessed and favored with a divine gift. A big part of your ministry is through your poetry.
     
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    The glory within us is through God's blessings. This was so beautiful I'm beyond words poetess.
     
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    let me kneel down unto thee .....beautiful piece
     
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    God saved the queen

    FABULOUS! :court:
    Praise God
     
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    this is good but ur marking urself

    all that i am is attributed to the almighty (this a five count) ur actually givin glory to "man"

    if there was not a god there would be no me (11)

    u just said if it wasn't for man there would be no god...


    LEARN HOW TO PRAY!!!!

    no disrespect intended, but ur intent is not ur own
     
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    No disrespect taken because I am open-minded. But I would love for you to expound upon the above because I don't understand where you coming from
     
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    when you write your presenting your soul to god and the world

    what i said although u accept what i've said with no disrespect, it did hurt your feelings, so for that i do apologize..

    the worse thing any writer can do is learn format and structure

    since it comes from the female element creativity it is not structured or formatted it is pure soul and emotion

    I wrote a thread entitled Ancient Information - it breaks it down a lil

    u know how they say "music calms a savage beast" .... it's the count, the beat, it shows how ur heart beats if u will

    prayers are the same -

    you'll get it because your willing to receive

    ^^ 11 count (divine female element blessings only)
     
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    If there was not a god there would be no me

    All that I am is Attributed

    11 on top
    9 below

    now it reads idea of goddess (if there was not a god there would be no me)
    All that i am is attibuted (complete 9 god is i am, and attributes come from idea female 11)


    this way it expresses the need for both to create....