Black Poetry : waitin n heat 2

[PLATINUMILLITY1]

aight soundz coo

 

[NubianWoman]

you are on a roll...only thing missing is the popcorn , i'll have that ready when i read part 3 ..i am enjoying your poems thank you

 

[PLATINUMILLITY1]

AWWWWWWWWWWW THANK YOU SOO MUCH NUBIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL ITS COMMIN GURL LOL

 

[Monetary]

HE SED YEAH WE DID SLEEP TOGETHER..
BUT I SWEAR IT WUZNT LONG!!"
A TEAR STARTS TO FORM
CUZ THIS CHICK HAS TORN DOWM M WORLD

That verse...especially that last line...blew me away. Although you got with him later, your immediate attention was on her...as if she's the one who tore your relationship apart when it starts with HIM. My focus is on the person you approached first..verbally...with your dislike of this situation. Most women attack the woman first. Sometimes, the man NEVER pays for his part in the matter although he may get a few verbal smacks, a burnt dinner or two...or none at all, and no sex for a minute.

Nice scribe, scribe.

 

[PLATINUMILLITY1]

YEAH THATZ VERY TRUE MORE THAN HALF ALMOST ALL THA TYME! THAS HOW WOMEN USUALLY FEEL LOL BUT I THANK YOU FA THA LUV IM GLAD UR FEELIN IT BRUH!!!!!!!!