Black Poetry : waitin n heat 2

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PLATINUMILLITY1, Nov 23, 2005.

  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS FOR THA FOLK THAT AINT READ PART 1 YET READ IT FIRST PLEEEEEEEEEEZZ! LOL
    http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=38363&referrerid=9670

    SO HERE I AM SITTIN
    I GOTTA DUMB A** LOOK ON MA FACE
    IM IN SOO MUCH AWW
    FROM WUT HE JUST FIXED HIS MOUTH TA SAY
    SHOULD I GET UP N SLAP HIM?
    NAH BUT I WONT RULE IT OUT
    SUM1 PLEEZ TELL ME WUH JUS HAPPEN!
    B4 I PASS OUT
    ALL THIS TYME WAITIN
    THINKIN IMA HAVE HIM TO MASELF
    N HE COMES HERE WIT THIS
    LIKE IM 1 OF THA GURLZ OF HUE HEF..
    WUT AM I TO DO??????
    WUT AM I TO SAY?
    LEAVE IT ALONE?
    OR GET IT ON?????
    I KNOW WUTS IN MY HEART
    N KNO WUTS IN HIS MIND
    DAYUM DAYUM DAYUM
    DAYUM I LOVE HIM SO
    BUT IF HE EXPECTS THIS FROM ME FOR US
    THEM IMA HAVE TA LET HIM GO
    "BABY WUT DO U SAY???"
    IT GOES IN N OUT MY EAR
    I SAY HUH
    IF IM SEXUAL WIT HER ITS ME N ONLY HER
    N I WONT BE COMMIN BAC TO YOU
    DONTCHU KNO U CANT HAVE THA CAKE N EAT IT TOO?
    OMG I CANT BELIEVE HE HAD THA NERVE
    BUT THEN I START THINKIN
    WUT IF HED BEEN GOIN IN N OUT OF HER?
    CULD IF I SAY YES OR IF I SAY NO
    MEAN THAT WE MIGHT BE OVER?
    SLOWLY I SAY WHERE DID U MEET HER?
    HE SAID "I WUZ IN BX IN WESCHESTER
    I KNO HER FRIEND WE WET TA SKOOL TAGETHER"
    OKAY U KNO HER FRIEND
    SO HOW DID YALL MEET UP?
    "MY HOMEGURL INTRODUCED US
    CUZ SHE DIDNT KNO I HAD U"
    OKAY SO U GOTTA GURLFRIEND
    THAT I DONT KNO ABOUT
    N SHE DONT KNO ABOUT ME?
    "UUUHH YEAH I HAVENT SPOKE TO HER LATELY"
    SO DID YALL TOO F***?
    "WHO ME N HER OR MY FRIEND?"
    WELL DAYUM GIMMEE THA RUNDOWN IF ITS LIKE THAT!
    "NAH NAH NOT EVEN BABY"
    WELL HOW DI THIS COME UP?
    UUUHH.........UUUHHHH
    SHE SED "BOY JUS TELL HER!"
    IM LIKE TELL ME WUT?????
    HE SED YEAH WE DID SLEEP TOGETHER..
    BUT I SWEAR IT WUZNT LONG!!"
    A TEAR STARTS TO FORM
    CUZ THIS CHICK HAS TORN DOWN MA WORLD
    OH U SWEAR IT WUZNT LONG!!
    THAT FEELS MUCH BETTER GLAD WE GOT THAT OUT!!!!!!!!!
    I REALLY CANT BELIEVE YOU!!
    THEN U BRING THA B**** TO MA HOUSE
    SHE SAID "WAIT WHO U CALLIN A B****!"
    HE SAID "HOL UP ESHA U DONT WANNA MESS WIT THIS"
    IM SOO FIRED UP IM READY TA CHARGE
    SO MANY EMOTIONS
    ONCE AGAIN MY HEART SCARRED
    GET HER OUT
    FOR SHE HAVE NO TEETH IN HER MOUTH
    HE TOL HER TO LEAVE MAYBE HELL TALK LATER
    I SED OH DONT WORRY CUZ U AINT TOO FAR BEHIND HER
    HE CLOSES THA DOOR
    N THEN HE TURNZ AROUND
    BUT TOO HIZ SURPRISE
    HES STARIN DOWN THA CHAMBER OF MA NINE

    LOL PART THREE COMMIN SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL
     
  2. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    waiting for part three.!
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awe dang, Platty...Wha happen?...I was kinda hoping 4 dat 3-some...lol...But I'm feeling where u takin it, tho...Can't wait for Part III....

    Peace!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooooweeeeeeeee!!
    i wanna know , tell us
    pt.3 to dis ...mad tyte Platinum
     
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    sounds like R.kelley need to give you a call so you can put your own trapped in the closet series. flow on poet. this was good.
     
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    **** ma!!!lemme find out....hahaha...this is entertaining....you got gangstuh wit son...im feelin that.....hahaha,yoooo.....thas sum crazy ish right there.....yo we gotta flow one of these days...should be interesting mamita....


    -Lurk
     
  7. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL THANK LURK YEEAHH WE GOTTA DO THAT THATLL BE COO!!!!!!
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no doubt no doubt...my email is "[email protected]"

    you could check me there...cant recieve messages here...

    im not a premium member...:uhh:
     
  9. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AIGHT PA YEAH IMA DO THAT I CANT RECIVE EM ETHA SO DONT EVEN WORRY BOUT IT LOL UUUMMM DO U HAVE YAHOO MSSNGR IT WULD PROLLY B EASIER CUZ IM NOT ON MA AOL COMP N I CA JUS SEND E-MAILZ CUZ THAT 1Z BAC IN NY
     
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    i have yahoo mail...i think i have messenger too...but thas back at home..right now im at work...but u could send me mail there..."[email protected]"...

    holla
     
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