Black Poetry : WAITIN N HEAT PART 3 (ITS HERE!!!!!)

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UUUUMM THIS IZ PART THREE IF U HAVENT READ 1 N 2 CLICK ON THEZE PLEEEEZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    FOR 1:http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=38363&referrerid=9670
    FOR 2:http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=38386&referrerid=9670

    STRAIGHT FIRST PERSON POV

    SO NOW U STANDIN HEA
    WIT THA HEAT ALL IN YA GRILL
    ALL THESE THOUGHTS N EMOTIONZ I FEEL
    THEREZ NO MORE ME N U
    JUST U N HER
    WELL I GUESS SHEZ UR NEW BOO
    AFTA ALL THA ****
    ERRYTHING I SACRAFICED FA U
    U TURN AROUND N STEP ON ME
    AZ IF I MEANT NUTHIN
    BUT THAS ALL GOOD HOMEBOY
    CUZ PAYBACK IZ A MUH
    DONTCHU THINK BRUH?????????
    GRABBED THA DRINK SET OUT FA US
    TOOK A LIL SIPP
    WELL A GULP
    OKAY OKAY I DOWNED IT
    THEN I LIT UP THA SPLIFF
    LOOK AT YOU STANDIN THERE
    NOT KNOWIN WUT DA DO WIT URSELF
    "BABY"
    ***** DONT BABY ME
    WUZ I UR BABY
    WHEN U WUZ LAYED UPP WIT HER
    GOIN OUT WIT HER
    U MADE ALL THOZE PROMISEZ
    TO ME
    LIKE I WUZ THA 1 N ONLY
    U BASTARD
    U KNO
    I EVEN THOUGHT ABOUT GROWIN UR SEED
    "BABY CAN U JUST LET ME EXPLAIN"
    OH NOW U WANNA EXPLAIN?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
    OH YEAH SURE GO AHEAD
    DO ME THA HONOR
    PISTOL STILL AIMED AT HIZ HEAD
    I SIT BAC N TAKE A BREATH
    "WELL ITS LIKE I WUZ TELL U"
    "YEAH ME N LARESHA STARTED TA KNOCK BOOTS"
    "BUT AZ SOON AZ I WUZ ABOUT TA DO MA THANG,
    ALL I CULD THINK ABOUT WUZ U"


    HOL UP
    HOL THA F*** UP
    DONTCHU C THIS GAT AIMED TO YA BRAIN
    N U GON SIT HERE N TRY TA SPIT SUM GAME
    MAN U SHULD ALREADY B DEAD
    BUT DAYUM I DONT WANNA MAKE A MESS
    ON MA FAVORITE CUSTOM MADE SILK SHEETS
    OH ENCASE U DIDNT RELIZE
    THIS HOL SET UP WUZ 4 U!!
    WULD U LIKE A GRAND TOUR BOO????????
    SINCE I KNO I WUZ IN UR THOUGHTZ SOOOO MUCH
    ITS ONLY RIGHT LUV!!!!!
    "BABY PLEEZ LET ME FINISH,
    I MEAN I KNO UR UPSET"
    UPSET????? UPSET???????
    U THINK IM UPSET?????
    OH A FEMALE WIT A GUN IN HER GRIP
    IZ JUST UPSET
    "OKAY UR MORE PASSED PISSED
    BUT PLEEZ!!!!!!!!"
    OH GO HEAD GO HEAD MASSA
    " WELL I CULD ONLY THINK ABOUT U
    N HOW U DONT DESERVE MA A**
    FA EVEN THINKIN BOUT DOIN THIS TA U
    WELL ME N ESHA SPENT THA REST OF THA DAY TALKIN
    TOL HA HOW U BEEN SO GOOD TA ME
    U WERE ALWAYZ REAL N KEPT IT STRAIGHT G
    WELL YEAH I CAME N ASKED U ABOUT THA THREESOME
    N KNEW U UD PROLLY TELL ME
    TA GO TA HELL OR BAC WHERE I CAME FROM
    BUT I FIGAED HAY IT WORTH A TRY
    BUT THAS NO WUT I.............
    WUT I..............
    ITS NOT WUTTI CAME TA ASK U"
    OH REALLY WELL WUT IZ IT HUH????
    "WELL I RELIZED HOW..........
    HOW I LOV EUR SMELL
    THE WAY U MOVE
    UR BRIGHT SMILE
    THE WAY U DRIVE ME WILD
    N I LUV TA HEAR UR SWEET VOICE SING"
    SO NOW IM ALL CONFUZED
    WONDERIN WUT DA HELL
    NOW HE TALKIN BOUT HOW I SING
    N OMG I CANT BELIEVE IT
    THIS ***** PULLZ OUT A RING!!!!!!!!!

    ALL YALL PEEPLE THAT WERE WAITIN FOR PART 3
    DERE IT IZ YA LIKE???????????
    WELL NOW YA GOTTA WAIT FOR
    PART 4 PART 4 PART4 PART 4..........LMAO :hi:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First off you crazy
    Second off you crazy
    Naw Man this is like
    Is this what you think about in ATL
    Just dont kill nobody
    I saw your record
    Much Love Poet-You shouldn introduce
    A band of wild babies with ties to gargoyles
    In part 4-LOL-Poet
     
  3. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lmao u r soooo silleeeeeeeeeeeee u crack me up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol....dis was tyte as the past two
    ya pen on a Platinum roll...........
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...thanx richie im tryin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :thinking: lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin the trip down ya lane
     
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    part three finally did come...i love it.
     
  8. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you richiee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    thanx ibeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!
    :luvu:
     
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    i must say this was deep sh*t. and i love it. you know im laughing on tant comment. he's crazy aint he. much love plat.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx nevar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i kno tant got prolemz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol
     
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