Black Poetry : WAITIN IN HEAT

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im sittin here thinkin
    i cant wait for u ta get home
    its been so long
    long long gone
    i miss ur kiss
    i miss ur touch
    i miss ur love
    dayum u need ta hurry up
    i wanna take u
    lay u down
    make u feel wut uve been missin
    luv ur gurl up n down
    i miss ur groan
    i miss ur moan
    i kno u miss mine too
    thas y u do like u do

    i am ur one
    i am ur only
    i wanna lay with u until mornin
    come home
    im so alone
    waitin 4 you
    but wait wuts that?
    thaat click clack
    could it be?

    finally
    yes it is
    u at tha door
    ur key unlocks
    it opens slowly
    oh this moment
    i am soo happy
    so darn content
    i c ur face
    ur so excited!
    jus like i knew
    knew that u wuld
    but who else iz this?
    anutha female
    my smile retreats

    r u cerious?
    this cant be good
    hey baby!
    i hear u say
    uuuuh hi who is she?
    oh this iz laresha
    "uuh hi" i say
    "but i dont kno yet if its nice ta meetcha"
    he say "babe
    i wanna ask ya sumthin
    but dont throw a tantrum" (lol u like that dontcha!)
    i sed it betta b good gon come wit it
    can we.....dont have a fit
    "spit out tha s**t" im in a chair sittin
    can we have a threesome?
    u must be kiddin!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!?!?!?!


    how yall feel me??????????????
    i mught make a part 2 if yall like t
     
  2. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Platty P....Enjoyed this flow...There needz 2 be a part 2 cuz I wanna know if the 3some jump-offed or not...Dont leave me in suspense...lol

    Peace!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alright now. is all i can say flow on poet.:juggle:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwww!!!!
    heatwave in da winter
    wait no longer............
     
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    Yes, I wanna know, was it a yes or a no, part 2 please....
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is hot
    You on fire for real huh
    Nice piece poet
    I need a cold shower-lol
    Much love poet
     
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    BrothaAdinkra Active Member MEMBER

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    I'm curious as to why part 2 ain't posted yet!! lol....this is better than trapped in the closet!! Giiirrrlll....I need to move to GA...lol :)
     
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    Hi PLATINUMPHATTY1
    Yes it is hot up in here..lol:)
    Wonderful flow yeah
    I was reading the comments as well
    in it justs added more zest to your drop :)
    Yeah I'm waiting on part 2 to
    Let the flow roll

    Peace Unto You
     
  9. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx yaaaaaaallll u kno i wuznt all that happy earlier but when i came here n read yall posts to me that made me feel really good n now i gotta smile on ma face see...............:biggrin: well i guess im actually cheezin! lolbut i wanna let yall kno that meanz alot ta me soooooooooooo:smooch: to all of ya i gots maaaad:hearts2: but uuuuuummmmm. yeah ima hit that part 2 fa yall!! its commin i dont wanna make ya ll wait lol im really happy that yall wuz feelin it!
     
  10. Passionfruit005

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    wow, nice twist, didn't see it comming lol
    very hot, gon head an drop that part 2, can't wait to see it
    holla back passion
     
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