Black Poetry : WAITIN N HEAT PART 4(FINALLYYYYY)

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CHECK OUT 1,2, N 3 IF YA HAVENT ALREADY DUN SO!!!!!!!!!!!
    FA 1:http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=38363&referrerid=9670
    FA 2:http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=38386&referrerid=9670
    FA 3:http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=38430&referrerid=9670

    N THIS ***** PULLZ OUT A RING..............................


    SO....... NOW IM THA 1
    WIT THA DUMB LOOK ON MA FACE
    ALL DISCOMBOBULATED
    I DONT KNO WUT TO SAY
    "BABY WILL YOU DO ME THE HONOR OF MARRYING ME?"
    I TOUCH MYSELF TO SEE IF THIS IZ REAL
    IT IZ SO I MUST BE GOIN CRAZY
    I SAY IZ THIS REALLY HAPPENING?????????
    HE SAYZ YES IT REALLY IZ
    IM 2 SECONDZ FROM CRYING
    I WULDVE NEVER GUESSED THIS
    THE GUN STILL STEADY
    DIDNT MOVE AN INCH
    I STARED AT THE 3 KT. WIT RUBY STUDDED RING
    IM SHAKIN WHERE I STAND
    I KNO HE IZ MY EVERYTHING
    BUT I DONT KNO
    IZ THIS RIGHT??????
    OR AM I SETTING MASELF UP FOR LONGTERM PAIN
    MY THROAT GETS TIGHT
    AZ I STAND THERE DELAYING
    AND THEN I LOOK IN HIS EYES
    AND I SEE THIS LOOK
    NOW IVE SEEN IT ALOT OF TYMES
    BUT NOW ITS MORE INTENSE
    SO INTENSE I CAN FEEL I CAN SENSE
    THEN I RELAX
    AND I LOWER THA BURNA
    JUST A FEW MOMENTS AGO
    I FELT LIKE WEN IKE LEFT HIZ WIFE FOR TINA
    BUT NOW I FEEL SPECIAL
    SO SPECIAL ITS INSANE
    HE STEPS CLOSER TO ME
    N THE TEARS FLOW OVER MY SKIN
    I TRY TO LIFT THA GUN BUT I CANT
    CLOSER AND CLOSER HE COMEZ
    AND THEN GRABZ MY HAND
    PULLZ ME TO HIM
    THE COMFORT SO GRAND
    I FALL INTO HIM LIKE THE LAST PERSON IN THA WORLD
    HE WHISPERS "I LOVE YOU,
    U ARE MY ONLY AND YOU I ADORE"
    I MANAGE TO GET MYSELF SUMWUT TOGETHA
    AND I KNO HE WANTS TO BE WITH ME FOREVA
    I STEP BACK AWAY AND AIM THE GUN TO HIZ CHEST

    BELEIVE IT OR NOT THERE IZ A SEQUEL! LOL
    PART 5 PART 5 PART 5 PART 5!!!!!! LMAO
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alright now plat cant wait for five go head girl.:luvv:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaa!!
    awesome tyte and it's a sequel too....
     
  4. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THNAX YAAAAAAALLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    MMMMUAAAAHHHH
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dito.........................
     
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    Okay, well I had a feeling saying yes would not be all that simple. The plot thickens, now let's hear the rest....
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Phatty1

    Aiight now. You're the female version of R Kelly...but without the alleged child molestation thing. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: j/k

    You're your own person. Do your thing. :D

    :toast:
     
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    man, phatty this is intense... staying tuned... ha ha ha DEEP GURL flow head
    D.S. (my eye balls are rolling on the floor)
     
  9. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LMAO YALL SILLEE LOL!!!!! YEAH I DONT HAVE NUNA THAT ON MA RECORD YET MONTY! LOL
    D.S. GURL U BETTA PICK UP DEM EYE BALLZ LOL
    THANX ALOT YALL!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    bring on da Sequel pt.5
     
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