Black Poetry : thoughts of a friend

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Nov 2, 2003.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    today i thought of you
    your smile
    how long we've been friends
    how i kissed the knife wound on your chest
    how we had to let go of that caress
    and just become friends
    i don't mind that
    sometimes i feel as tho i was caught in some suspended time and space
    only to land home and be lucky that i'm still in tact
    fingertips touching, we will always laugh
    we will always be there for one another
    but i am more focused now on...being a mother and being a wife and tending to my own family...i have a few demons to fight they ride me day and night
    i need to get in touch with my spirituality
    it's the only way i'll be free of my discontent
    the pressure to lead my family and my man away from certain negative things
    i could go on...nothing you need to deal with...but i thought today about kissing your scar and i smiled cause you have come so far
    the young man i once met
    the full grown man i deal with now
    it's been my pleasure baby boy...it's been my pleasure
    to have you in my life
    in so many different ways
    life is an experience
    one that i'm glad that i have shared with you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed it is Red.....
    ya lovin heart is kind to the one u speaketh of
    this was warm...very nice drop
     
  3. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can feel the love in ur words....
     
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    i feel the compassionate of the love you have inside...
    this was very well set nice flow girl :angel1:
     
  5. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for feeling this poem, i was just thinking some thoughts about someone dear to me...but it was a thought in passing....thanks.
     
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    feeling the warmth in your flow
    wonderful
    very nice
    Peace
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhhhhhhhh!

    Moments in time, sweet memories...these are the things of
    good poetry!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
  8. Cindy

    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    redlady

    I always look for you when I get to the page. You never disappoint me :) There is so much love in these here words... Memories that bring a smile always make the day go smoother...
    :heart:
    Much love to you...
     
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