Black Poetry : THEN THEM, NOW US! (THIS IS REAL TALK, PLEASE READ!)

[Alpha Male]

reply to Bulewater

Bluewater out of curiosity
what did you learn from my verbosity?
Thanks for reading twice
perhaps you can read it thrice

message in the script..learning as i read..feeling your vibe...read this drop more then twice...speak brother...flow on ...poet
Peace
BlueWater

 

[Bluewater]

Bluewater out of curiosity
what did you learn from my verbosity?
Thanks for reading twice
perhaps you can read it thrice

the best of Us indeed ..flows within a circle..finding no end..you have a map a trail from then to here..and feed the mind in detail...that the life with live, don't mean the end of our life..and your verbs give a message of advise..or a warning...that enslavement has become another form within our community amonst ourselves..perhaps i may not be seeing clear..it is only my view..not looking for clues, just feeling and living
Peace
BlueWater

 

[rasheed]

Alpha Male,
i enjoyed this accounting and the appeal so real

So Be it, AAAAAAAMEEEEEN

 

[Antar]

you a really talented poet
dude
i need to go eat me a
sammich
an soon i'll come back

one love,
/antar

 

[Alpha Male]

Re: TO Bluewater

Bluewater you received my communication as I intended.
That others get wisdom from this poem is very splendid.
Two weeks it was in the making, I admit it was a brain slapper.
I hope this poem becomes our peoples anthum and brain zapper !​

the best of Us indeed ..flows within a circle..finding no end..you have a map a trail from then to here..and feed the mind in detail...that the life with live, don't mean the end of our life..and your verbs give a message of advise..or a warning...that enslavement has become another form within our community amonst ourselves..perhaps i may not be seeing clear..it is only my view..not looking for clues, just feeling and living
Peace
BlueWater