Black Poetry : THEN THEM, NOW US! (THIS IS REAL TALK, PLEASE READ!)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alpha Male, Apr 21, 2004.

  1. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I repent of writing the trash that was here
    Lord Jesus forgive me for the violence
    Have mercy on me


    THANK YOU
    ALPHA MALE
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa what a way to express it and bring the truth
    this was de awesome flow to be covered in ...TYTEEEEEEEEE!!!
    Alpha Male simply tyte
     
  3. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: TO $$RICH$$

    The poet Alpha Male bows
    And says Thank you $$RICH$$


     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In other words...same sh!*...different day.
    back then they enslaved us cunningly...today they do it legally.
    I really like the way you laid this out...
     
  5. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice (10x).

    Then them, now us............then ours...
    Will the cycle be broken before then?
     
  6. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reply Queentswana

    Queentswana, the right words are back then the man oppressed
    our ancestors but today we oppress each other.
    Please understand the possiveness of the word OUR.
    It is not their drugs, their bullets, their rap music, their community, It's Ours.
    Good luck!
     
  7. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reply to positive mind set

    Thank you friend
    It will end
    soon as we come togther
    and outst the vicious tyrants
    from our community
     
  8. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Umph!
    Tell it Alpha!
    Tell it until
    all ears are
    harassed!
    Deep drop!
     
  9. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reply to Purplemoons

    Drop it deep in your heart purple moon
    Let no vicious tyrant cause you to swoon!
    The poet bows in you presence
    and says thank for the presents!

     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When the enemy has convinced you to kill yourselves, the end draws near...tyte piece.
     
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