Black Poetry : simple eruption

[skrybe7]

words
they struggle fight and strive
to rise and break the surface
of what is layered over the land
they percolate and filter through
mountains of falacy
to erupt and flow over jagged
and cruel terrains relentlessly rocky
and run smooth and fiery over
arid barren plains in a simple
hopeless flow that once given
over to the elements that exist
will simply cool and coalesce
and will simply meld and blend into
yet one more layer of the very land
over which it erupted and ran

03/28/03/ Michael

 

[Moses the Poet]

I really like the movement of your imagery.
This is a poem that I can relate to personally.
You really brought words to life here.

Andrew

 

[skrybe7]

Thanx Moses. I just write it like I see it...
when I can...
Looking forward to reading more of
your poetry which has been excellent!

 

[StarGoddess]

diggit....

currently being one that is floundering for my once prolific use of verse and imagry...i must say...this does give inspiration

thank you for the scribe scrybe.....

**pondering**

 

[skrybe7]

Thanx, StarGoddess.
I'm happy to pass on any inspiration
before I am buried lol. God bless.