Black Poetry : Simple Pleasures...

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  1. Blue

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    The Cool is working on its next major project...a compilation book!!! Finally!!! This is your chance to take part in the creative movement! Until Sept. 26th, we will accepting poems, songs, thoughts and short stories based off the theme: "What's a beautiful body without a mind?". Be Creative. Share your point of view. The best submission will be published in our book due THIS FALL!. If you have any questions, message me! :)

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    Submission to be published::

    Simple Pleasures...
    Theresa Garcia and Christopher Bell

    Sweet nesses, caresses and tenderness
    Fortunate for you
    I'm waiting for orange moons and the pink skies
    Love laying in your comfortness
    waiting for your purple
    To rain inside me
    Don't wanna ruin this moment
    But I'm on a quest to be high
    On you
    I
    Wanna Make myself melt
    On lullaby's
    While thinking of you
    Head over heels
    With the sound of my soul and the pleasures that cum from within
    Cumming from thoughts of your vibes

    Sweetness inside my own walls
    Tasting my simple pleasures
    I wanna experience Happiness
    ….on many levels

    Settle deep in my thoughts
    Taste my soul
    Drip drop, drip drop my love goes…
    Taste…my…sweet love
    Sugar water
    Honeysuckle
    Call it what you want it

    Grab my desires
    Make love to my dreams

    All I see is cut scenes
    Of you…
    Making love to me…

    As you…
    speak sweet nothings
    mind, body, soul as a whole
    an experience…
    like no other.

    Love the way your lips taste…
    My lips
    My neck
    My chest
    My thighs
    My toes
    Repeat.
    Til the sun grows…

    But we started making love months ago
    I remember the first night you penetrated my mind
    With knowledge and insight
    That night, my dreams became clear
    But I wasn't ready to believe…

    As more nights passed
    I looked into your eyes
    I could tell when you were beginning to love me
    You didn't have to say anything
    You were just always there for me,

    You're such a strong, serious, spiritual being
    Even on my worst day, you always found ways to…
    Make me laugh and smile
    So simple, yet so deep
    Right before my eyes, you evolved from Best Friend to Lover

    Words can't describe the feelings I have for you
    Take my body as a gift from me to you
    I am so into you…

    Grab me
    Touch me
    Kiss me
    Love me

    Oh creative lover
    Dreamer of the stars
    This love too vast for just one room
    Let's go to the stars….
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesome piece poet, ...it was 'Breath-taking lay-out.
     
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    THIS was absolutely FABULOUS! Kudos to Ms. Garcia and Mr. Bell for such a poignant piece! :toast:
     
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    "you evolved from Best Friend to Lover"


    always painful for me to hear


    good poem cherryblossum
     
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    Very Nice!


    There are many wonderful lines and verses, but I enjoyed the above most, because love is more powerful shown.

    I thoroughly enjoyed this. It stirred creative juices. Thanks for sharing.

    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was an awesome read ....love da flow
     
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    I love this drop very much. It just flowed oh so nicely
     
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