Black Poetry : Please Tell Me

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  1. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I asked him if he still love me
    and u know what he said?
    "what kind of question is that?''
    do you know what does to ur insides?
    why is falling in love so easy
    but falling out so hard
    loving so intensely, giving all u have
    only to loose ur grip on sanity,and
    yet not clinically mad?
    When did he find out that things was not same?
    was he waiting for a good day
    a right time, some reason to cause pain?
    I didnt want to fall in love
    to compromise my goals,
    lessened my ideals,
    lare bare my soul.
    but i did.
    I did, i crashed head first into that garnet pool of anger and
    euphoria, pain and desire.
    why couldnt he answer the question ,
    it was simple dont u agree?
    only yes or no would suffice for me.
    i cant handle the intensity.

    He doesnt love me any more , doesnt he?:cry::crying:
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love is a very subtle thing...as are emotions, at any particular time of day, depending on your mood, you may respond in a number of different ways to a question of that nature...pride gets in the way, fear gets in the way...and it all creates confusion...

    BUT TRUTH - is a burning fire welling up inside of your heart and soul...and it is inside that secret place where you will "feel" the answer to your question - regardless of what he - or anyone - has to say about it

    MANY BLESSINGS
    2fish
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love is grand it hold beauty as it leak out unto da heart
     
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    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey thanx, trying to make me understand this love thing, it reall hard but im willing. thanx for the love! Da Youngun.
     
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    yo gon be ailright child...just be true 2 your heart :)
     
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