Black Poetry : WHY WHY WHY PLEASE TELL ME

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  1. THETRUTH

    THETRUTH Active Member MEMBER

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    WHY MUST I BE A THUG FOR GIRLZ/WOMEN TO LIKE ME

    WHY MUST I BE THE ONE TO BE HARD, AND MAKE EVERYONE FIGHT ME

    WHY MUST I WEAR MY HAIR LONG EVEN THOUGH I DONT LIKE THAT

    WHY DO THEY SAY THEY WANT A GOOD MAN..BUT GO RUNNIN BACK

    AM I REALLY BEAUTIFUL ? WILL IT EVER BE KNOWN?

    WHY MUST I WONDER WILL MY BEAUTY PREVAIL BEFORE IM LONG GONE'

    WHY MUST I TORTURE MYSELF INTO THINKING THAT ITS MY WEIGHT

    WHY CANT WE ALL JUST DEAL WITH OUR FATE?

    INNER BEAUTY DOESNT SEEM TO WORK THESE DAYZ

    ESPECIALLY WHEN URE AROUND IMMATURE PEEPZ THAT GOT UR MIND IN A MAZE

    WHY DO THEY GO FOR THESE THINGZ THAT END UP HURTIN THEM?

    I ASK WHY MY PEOPLE...WHY.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    why why why ! is yet define
    mindz lost into mental
    slavery trying to be da man
    forcing folkz to understand
    has been plan by da greed
    where no beauty prevail under
    the sleeve , trying to hard is a
    myth when inside our hearts
    soft as a mint , thug life is only
    a side show it won't get you
    pass the line go , what's inside
    will be shown and true love will
    reveil what's deep and instilled
    yet we wonder why,it's that we
    still live in mental slavery of da
    american way of humankind
    and destructional mindz .........

    this make ya wonder who and why
    what's real and what's a lie so now
    i wonder why !!!!!! tyte scribe on da TRUTH
     
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    THETRUTH Active Member MEMBER

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    it just botherz me a lot
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word so many still trap in the mental slavery mindset and off the hype been fed
    i feel ya
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why must I portray to be a man that I am not
    why do these fake *** women ride my joke
    why do I have to stand on a corner and hustal these rocks
    why can't I just be an educated brother
    why does society treat my people as a social lepper
    why does 1+1 equal 2 and not just one
    why did my mother give birth to me and my father run

    My bad just had to add some of my taste to it. But that joint was hot. Keep it like that don't change a thing.
     
  6. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why am i the only one who can't come up with their own WHY poem...lol...it's a hard life...and if we spend all day asking ourselves "why this and why that"....where will it lead us? so we must move on with life....forget about asking WHY....but ask HOW can i make it better :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why can't we just see ourselves as we truly are and love ourselves for that? Why can't others appreciate and see us for who we truly are? Thought provoking and intriguing write. Flow on.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was real
    And if u taper it up,
    I won't mind(wink,wink)
    Nice drop
     
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    Nice poem, keep flowin!
     
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