Black Poetry : *PLEASE TELL ME*

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by turtle1, Mar 14, 2004.

  1. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PLEASE TELL ME.......

    TELL ME HOW TO HOLD YOU
    HOW TO BRING YOUR LOVE INTO VEIW
    HOW TO MAKE YOU SMILE AND SING
    CAUSE LOVE
    I SUBMIT TO YOU EVERY THING
    MY HEART OVERFLOWS WITH JOY FOR YOU
    AND THERE IS NOTHING IN THIS WORLD
    I WOULDN'T DO
    TO PROVE......

    SO PLEASE TELL ME.....

    HOW TO WHISPER IN YOUR EAR
    HOW TO RELAY THIS PASSION WHEN YOU ARE NEAR
    HOW TO TOUCH YOUR LIPS
    WHEN FACE TO FACE
    HOW TO COME INTO YOUR HEART
    AND FILL THAT EMPTY PLACE......

    PLEASE.......

    TELL ME HOW TO TOUCH YOUR SKIN
    SO I CAN REACH THE FIRES DEEP WITHIN
    LAY YOUR SWEET LOVELY BODY DOWN TO REST
    LET ME QUENCH THE FLAME WITH A SOFT CARESS

    PLEASE BABY.....
    MY QUEEN.....
    MY INSPIRATION.....
    THE SOFT SCENT OF DESIRE IN THE AIR.....
    THE VERY AIR I BREATHE.....
    THE BLUE SKY I DREAM TO AT NIGHT.....

    THE TWINKLE THAT MAKES THE STARS SHINE
    HOW LONG MUST I WONDER
    WILL YOU BE MINE
    BUT IF IT'S GODS WILL
    THAT YOU COME INTO VEIW

    PLEASE TELL ME MY QUEEN

    DO YOU KNOW

    HOW MUCH I WANT TO FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU :love:


    :heart: SIEMPRE MI AMORE :heart:
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BROTHER TURTLE

    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:


    ...ur..rrr....you know what's coming next right...

    Ok...I adore this artistically expressed masterpiece of urgent love you've
    so elouqently scribed...and I have to HEAR YOU speak this piece... :blush:



    I LOVE IT...That much...so keep it by your side...cuz the next time
    I'm on the mic...I will be requesting it... :wink:



    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hopefully when she hears this, she will tell you. Sounds like a scribe from the heart, emotively written. Keep the flow going.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my brother
    this was so
    sweet....
    likes this one alot
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u laid it out like the red carpet dis was beautiful
    surely she will hear u on this
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i moved to this piece, not because of the title but because of your name..
    I am a turtle woman...as you can see from my signature the turtle has much to say and offer...but then i read your lovely flow..
    was not surprised...after all the turtle flows and knows when he does
    (or she does) when and how to flow...i will definitely be watching for you.
    and thanks...for sharing
     
  7. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HELLO.....

    THANKS FAM FOR THE LOVE!!!
    MUCH LOVE TO YOU!!!!!!
     
  8. SPIRITNORTH

    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    wwwwwwwwwwwwwowowo wweee wow wowo wow
    and umm


    wow!
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    from the heart
    this flow is
    so nice indeed
    much love
    flow on
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  10. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you blue and spirit!!!!
    thanks for the love!!!!
     
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