Black Poetry : pimpin poetically

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  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he pimps words, syllables, x-rated thoughts
    out on cyber paper for her eyes to see
    he wants to break her down again
    adultery
    fornication
    how he longs to melt her
    insatiably wet her
    not ever thinking of the wife
    however devoted
    never thinking of how he cheats his
    daughter and son
    and she
    resists
    resists
    but won't block his name
    or voice or number...
    testing her own will
    embarking on dangerous waters...
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wildflower...

    keep pimpin' us poetically...

    This is straight...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    word, GQ!
    thanks for the read.
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Its easy to be a Pimp but its hard being a man
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hear that dre!
    -7
     
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    did he do this...intentionally...

    seduce her to fornication
    and adultery
    words planting seeds
    seeds taking sprout
    fresh grown blossoms
    removing all doubt
    of what should be done

    or, do we obey our thirst

    PIMPING AIN'T EASY.
    there's an art to this madness.
     
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    they're all "dolo" no "mite"....

    he's pimpin... himself

    peace
    jh.
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller... it was purposeful and it suffered long
    but is sho wuzn't luuv...

    tru dat j'hiah...
    -7
     
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    see he be
    living a life not his
    reinacts it on cyberspace
    boards not listening to
    the voice on the write side

    but tries to get his pimpin' in
    when his lil' fella is limpin'
    and failin' him
    living up to a self imposed vision
    through verse cause in life it's too
    hard

    see she be
    not cuttin' his voice
    short or deletin'
    his name or blockin his number
    cause what he speaks
    seeps into her vacancies she
    wants to fill / is all this real
    she thinks
    she rationalizes it as
    keyboard strokes
    where her body is not touched
    yet her mind is soothed
    caught up in a pimpin' groove

    see she be
    testing dangerous waters
    cause she figures she can swim
    without ambivalent emotions

    and he be still scribing his next
    baby, baby
    for her to read
    while his soul bleeds

    under night time lamps
    and keyed fingertaps.


    W7, it is so nice to see you around.
    blak
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetess...

    quite on point....

    digging what has already been said ~ especially feelin AACOOLDRE.


    speak truth

    a
     
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