Black Poetry : Pimpin' (got a lil cocky on this one)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jan 22, 2005.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dont gotta keep the ladies laced
    for them to chase me @ a crazy pace
    Maybe its my style or maybe its the baby face
    There aint a girl in this world thats made me chase
    the panties just so I can see the Sa-Tin Lace
    Get it?
    I got girls onthe east coast tellin me that I wet it
    Ebony, Kandyce, Krystal, and Tiffany are the ones that said it
    Check it
    I got stick figures, girls with thick figures
    tellin me they masterbate n rub their cl*t to my pictures
    Shorty from ATL wanna see me so she's been savin up
    Girlz back home say they miss me, but aint gave it up
    I got straight girls around me straight changin up
    They call me in the middle of the night
    Becuz apparently their man aint workin the middle right
    So I kiss it, lick it, and fiddle it like
    They want it, I be on it - give em a little bite
    Men hate me, broken hearts may fault me
    Becuz I have women in their thirties that stalk me
    It could be the attitude or the tats on the arm
    Or maybe my face, but then again I have less freckles than charm
    It could be the creativity that flows from my fingers
    To make these women of different ages fall for my demeanor
    Maybe its the trophies, awards, or the ribbons
    that can explain why I have more women than years I've been livin'
    Maybe they see my confidence n see Im not new to this
    that makes me know more area codes than ludacris
    I know names from A- Z
    Maybe its my vocab or sh*t, maybe its me.
     
  2. freequeensee

    freequeensee Member MEMBER

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    Love dat flow

    Easy read for me I loved your bounce on that piece. It's so true about not having to chase the panties men n boys even have it made these days....
    Ladies let guys chase you a little dey love to chase..... I got a guy calling me every other hour and it's a turn off but the one who calls me every day at 10:00 that's the one that's one I'm crazy about. Can't explain it....

    Now Make It Bounce :welldone:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i heard dat , the tale of life and easy fitting ....
    nice drop
     
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    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this $hyt rite here was hottttt :sick: :jump: !!! KEeP d0iN dA **** tHaNg!!! :flamet:
     
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    Heartfelt Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey what up Kid? This piece is on fire right here. Keep ya pen flowin as usual. 1 luv
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GIRL!! i loved this...glad to read u again...
     
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    It's just da writer in ya can't hate :kiss1:
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i appreciate the luv

    i honestly didnt think that some of u would enjoy this write, but i guess i was wrong. much luv n respect...
     
  9. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Off Tha Chain

    I'm feelin this here playa. Keep up the good work.:)
     
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    lol why wouldnt folks enjoy it? :read:

    ya game is smooth sista lol i cant deny it

    its just good to read you again :)
     
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