Black Poetry : I wonder

[Carameldlite]

I wonder
Do you know my pain
Do you know my strife
Can you see past my smile
And into my life
Do you see the ****
That causes my fears
Can you pinpoint what exactly
Brings me to tears
Do I make any sense
Do you even care
I'm at my breaking point
I'm living in a nightmare
I'm scared to feel cuz
I don't want that rejection
To look in the mirror
And hate my reflection
I love so much
But I'm crippled by fear
I just wanna be loved
Without worries or tears

 

[choclatefantasy]

that poem was hot! it captured how i feel most of the time! keep it up girl!

 

[watzinaname]

That need just to be loved, without the fear of being hurt, makes us so afraid to love. You described this pain so well poet.

 

[$$RICH$$]

felt the depth of this piece ....flow on express

 

[Carameldlite]

Thanks for all the feedback. I really appreciate it.