Black Haiku : i wonder

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  1. deepy

    deepy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes I wonder
    Will the bloom stay on the rose
    Even though it’s picked..






    (c)ncn 2008
     
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    smell the aroma.
    feel the petals, not the thorns.
    no picked rose will last.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Once plucked within it
    da rose will wilt in tyme span
    but da beauty last
     
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    HODEE going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Pressed rose in a book
    Has beauty with every look
    Remains a flower to hold
     
  5. deepy

    deepy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in response to hodee,$rich,mizjoice and me

    woman see one thing
    bless them-men see another
    hold on to the rose..
     
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    So he turn to her
    upon the face is da look
    a rose to treasure
     
  7. Shantrell

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    when the rose is plucked
    so begins it's sweet decline
    soft petals wither
     
  8. deepy

    deepy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shantrell how lovely
    understanding this short form
    bringing rose attar.....