Black Poetry : Decisions

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Jul 19, 2006.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you have so many pairs of pants hanging up inside your mind

    if i climbed inside of them would you rant or let my Dr. Seuss rhymes

    undress your heart until you're inclined

    to let me caress the bare bottom of your soul

    while you gently grab a hold

    of my hand

    reassuring me that i'll always be the man

    you desire



    love,

    howard
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sir indeed spit it out bruh !
     
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    Howard:
    Your writing always brings a smile to my face.
    I really like how you end them all with love, Howard
    Keep doin' yo thang
    Much luv to you.
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks $$rich$$

    thanks 4everluv
     
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    Short and sweet, but the interpretations are limitless. That's what I love about poetry, the way one thing can be interpreted so many different ways, thats what I love about this piece.
     
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    :)

    Nice job Howard, very sweet poem:)

    Much Love

    AM
     
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