Black Poetry : Decisions

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  1. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A self made situation
    Something he did without a thought or concern
    Is now irreversible and
    To a child
    So complicated and frightening

    At the start he didn't fore-see
    In his immaturity
    This possibilty
    or
    The chance of this happening
    Yet still here they are

    Partners in stupidity
    Not partners
    Please
    This is just the two
    Mutually f_ _ _ing up
    And for what
    An [email protected]
    A nut
    not enough

    Now he's stuck
    Stuck because
    His conscience wont allow him
    to do anythign else but be
    A father to
    and to love this child
    Even though he wont know how
    Even though it might complicate things
    and even though at times
    He will pray for wings...
    He see's images in his mind
    Of a child with his face
    and with his mind
    Growing up unable to find
    A father
    Never that.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well felt poet ...........
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dag! Excellent Write.
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was really good!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some serious food for thought, for every time two come together, for pleasure, this could very well be the result. Well written poet...wow.
     
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