Quiet Poetry Lounge : Cry Child Cry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Dec 3, 2003.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The ash tear stain on her cheek
    her eyes so sad
    her heart so weak
    as you look into her eyes
    there is no sparkle
    there is no life
    she have seen to much in her young life
    wino leaning on the corner
    peolpe dying right before her
    gun shoots ringing in the air
    she no longer cares
    as she walk going no where
    cry cry my child
    please do cry
    it is ok to cry
    hold your head up dear child
    look toward the sky
    you much survial
    you much beome stronger
    growing should not be like this
    cry child cry
    do not be silent
    hold on please
    hold on to life
    survial child survial
    as i cry
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautifully done
    weep not child of shame
    but cry cry cry my child
    of the endless struggle
    we facing daily
    the ash of the eye is
    dry no moist or a choice
    so cry child and know
    there is a GOD
    a Father above watching
    and to clear thy child soul

    I really love this piece and it remain in my heart
     
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    thank you my brother Rich..i do cry...my heart becomes heavy ...our faith is our strenght a better day is on the way...from the heart:heart:
     
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    most welcome sistah Bluewater ya pen works wonders
    to my heart and i love it keep flowin and speaking .......
     
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