Black Poetry : the child cry,s..........

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Jul 23, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please mamma listen to me..
    i,m in need of youre love....
    Please pappa listen to me..
    i,m in need..
    its the blood inside my vains thats calling you...

    Why is there an empty spot.....?
    when the parents come and pick up my classmates from school?
    Why is there an empty chair when i,m doing my first schoolperformens?

    Why was there a voice missing on the sideline when i catched my
    first ball..?
    Why wasn,t there astrong hand to pick me up when i hurt my knee..after i ride my first bike...?

    He cry,s daddy..
    He cry,s mommy..

    She cry,s daddy..
    She cry,s mommy...

    Where are you ..?
    why arent you here?

    I MISS you......

    Do you miss me?
    Am i not worthy to you...
    AM i not youre own flesh and blood...
    What is it that i have done to wrong...

    ..That you dont want to see my smile..
    see my eyes....
    Dont you want to see my walk...?
    dont you want to hear me talk....?
    I have so much to tell You...
    Why did you brought me here....

    I made a beautifull painting for you...
    you got to see it....
    i never had the chance to give it to you..

    (20 years later)

    .................................because you weren,t there...
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW! DEEP FLOW
    THIS HAD MY HEART BEATING FAST FROM THE START
    SCRIBE ON POET !
     
  3. Bluewater

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    wow libertylaida
    very strong
    let the flow:roll:
    much love to you
    Peace
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so sad:(
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and you are Swt............means sweet !

    thanks for feeling the poem....


    blessya sista!

    liberty
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and not to forget you to RIch!

    yes

    i wil skrybe on....

    bless ..
    liberty
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is very pertinent and beautifully put, liberty.
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the words so true
    touch my heart and i feel so blue
    for the many lost child and the lonely soul
    with no mother and father to make them whole
    this was sadly effective
    thank u
     
  9. Poeticsoulsista

    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very heart felt.

    Much love and peace
    Poetic Sista
     
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