Black Poetry : A Child's Cry

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  1. geegee

    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A foolish mistake is all you could think.

    Couldn't wait to pour the evidence down the sink.
    Hoping a doctor can fix what you don't want to face.
    Images of caring for someone is your biggest disgrace.
    Looked at the doctor and said, "I'm ready, lets do it".
    Didn't even consider other options before you pursued it.
    Selfishly took a innocent & precious life that was apart of you.

    Compassion for this child wasn't on your list of things to do.
    Realizing your careless decision was to let your child die.
    Your decision would've been different if you heard your child cry!
     
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    the love of a tiny life is so precious and dear
    from the flicked womb the seed fear
    taken with out a care as that time had near
    sad tale of Abortion wasted fetus lost life
    could have been a doctor a husband or wife
    a childs cry is heard deeply

    felt all this and can relate so well speak on geegee!
     
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    hiphop4ever Active Member MEMBER

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    something to think about
    this was here
    poetry wit depth
    I can dig it
     
  4. geegee

    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comments
     
  5. Lynne'

    Lynne' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree.
    well said
     
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    great concept on this heartfelt poem....nice

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im feelin this one also. Nice poem, got me thinkin

    keep the flow goin
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Geegee,
    Even though I share a different opinion, I still liked your piece. Very creative.

    gr
    moham
     
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    peace,

    very powerful geegee........

    peace
     
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