Black Poetry : ****, and she wasn't even 18 yet

[$$RICH$$]

feeling all dis here
as my mind drift into that place
the tyme zone and the sorrow song
bad as can be , too hot for eyes to see
didn't know what lay ahead until she
was captured and bang to da head
left and rights night after night
awaken hood her soul stood in capside
til da bang it lay roadside damnnnnnn!!!!

sometime we can talk and speak give advice
til da knees get weak only will they stray 16
what a way to play da game that wasn't ready
now got tame in the mist of lifeless twist
wasn't 18 yet didn't know s#!t my my i'm feelin dis
thinking about a few i know in the hood
but i can't give up or in there soul i'll try to win
thankz for this .......may i show this piece to them ?

 

[Desert Storm]

man, i was 18 but hell i'm sure glad it didn't happen to me.... cuz i had a nig get that close to me one time and probably would have ended up in that same place... the lord spared me from hard criminals for real.... man.... i don't know what say to this one...that's just straight up sad....thanks for postin it ... young girls foolin around need to hear this one. that's not what makes a woman.... deep gurl deep.... blessings sista

 

[Sweet baby_face]

that's a real unfortunate situation
to know
i can really visualize yr words
the honesty is touching.

 

[PoeticManifesta]

Where the hell was her momma? I dont even wanna know....
you cant be 16 and leave your family...
its inpossible...
yoU cant be 16.. and leave school..
its truancy..
somebody should have called th cops n turned her in,
maybe her body wouldnt be dead from within.

 

[nevar]

just wanted to comment again on raising the awareness of never giving up on the ones who are lost. embrace them and comfort them show them nothing but love.