Black Poetry : It Wasn't The Music

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  1. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It wasn't the music
    Inspired by Rachel and Daft Punk
    By Manasiac

    It wasn't the music
    At Jay's Store
    When you first walked through the door
    I was glancing at the gyal wit da lovely size of 2 to 4

    When your voice came on the mic
    It was an elegant voice
    All Proper and thangs
    This project boy was like dang
    Lil Mama sound and look off the chain

    Hathor when I saw you dance
    I was caught into a trance

    I wanted to slid behind you
    Close like a tire on a street
    But I know was not gone act right
    So Instead
    I poured me a cup of wine
    And watched your lovely body dance for a time

    When I saw you outside smokin yo cigar
    I usually be tripping
    But I did not care
    When you blew out the smoke it made me stare

    Your voice was articulating beautiful words in my mind
    I was saying to myself
    To this girl I aint gone sell no wooden nickels
    Because to spend with time with her
    All the way to Brunswick from Jax I will ride my bicycle

    And when I was close to you and hugging on you
    I felt like I was in a dream
    Your hugs feel so good to me
    That to give them, you should charge a fee

    So I just wanted to write you this to say
    I would like to get to know you
    But Before I do
    Let me slide my contract to you

    I aint gone stalk where u stay
    Calling you at 3 in the mawning
    Talkin bout Rachel what you got on
    With me on the other end trying to sexy
    But yet and still I is sleepy and yawning

    Nor will I be at yo job
    Nor will I be all in yo grill piece
    I will not be the man with an S on his chest

    That S stands for Stalker
    A Man who only love drama and stress

    So in Closing
    I just wanted to tell you why I was digging ya
    Just being honest with you
    About who I am and what some of my beliefs are
    I am not trying to skur you
    Because I know some cats who come off like this
    Do the opposite of what they tell you

    So with that established
    I hope you feelin it

    Because it wasn't the music
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i hear it and not in tunes ....tyte write poet
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    posed well mani
    likes the flow
    it was tight
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like you were diggin her style, keep the flow going.
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte!!
    like the title..

    jh...
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yup

    Sounds like ya diggin her style on the real, nice way to tell her how ya feel.
     
  7. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man I'm loving the way you flexing your skills.
    Continue to dazzle us all!!!!!
    This is tyteness!!!!!


    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Manasaic...that can't be you in this piece is it?...somebody caught your eye?...well good for you :luv:
     
  9. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well alot of women catch my eye, so do not get yo hopes up too high. :smile:
     
  10. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very silky smooth... :toast:
    you could've caught me with a poem like this :kiss:
    mo power

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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