Black Poetry : IF IT WASN'T BROKE

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    If it wasn't broke

    Then I wouldn't be
    Losing sight of hope

    The fantasy that you'd come home
    Amen,
    And I would not be alone

    ......to reason with myself
    About how
    Things could be

    But if your not here to
    Complete me
    Then how can we be we

    If it wasn't broke

    Then u would know
    That u don't hold the key

    That u don't have the authority
    To
    Think for me

    If it wasn't broke

    And hold the mark
    of Judas' kiss
    Peace would reign

    With graceful bliss

    If it wasn't broke

    Like a wave crashing
    to the seashore

    The Lion wouldn't roar for war

    If it wasn't broke

    The realization that the only way
    To secure a peace
    Is to wage raw war

    Upon the beast...

    I mean,

    If it wasn't broke......

    you wouldn't think that meant

    without money

    you would know
    that I'm broke

    dummy!
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very, very nice write!!

    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I so understand by reasons ...tyte write
     
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    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, your message was right on point. I saw my reflection in some of your words
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some folks won't get it unless you use a little force behind your words, enjoyed poetess.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    your spirit could never "broken"

    you are too much of a soldier

    peace
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If it ain't broke don't fix it.


    :zipit: Shut yo' mouth... Girl, STILL got it goin' on!
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    WELCOME HOME
    WELCOME HOME
    WELCOME HOME
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    DANG! C'IN U HAS MADE MY DAY!!!

    HOPE U GOOD 1POET... NOW GET TA FLOWIN!!!!!

    NAH... GOOD TO C U BROTHER U WERE TRULY MISS'D

    :bowdown:
     
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