Black Poetry : You were there lord.You were there..was i dreaming..?

[watzinaname]

I really felt this piece. I know how it feels, and many do, when you've had that closeness once, and think that you're on your way to having in again, and then, bam, something happens to it. Sounds like this man got cold feet? Perhaps he still cares but got scared? I'm not sure....This was very emotive and well expressed.

 

[LibertyLady]

i just finished the poem cause it didnt have an end.....
because i didnt understand i myself..
but i could finish the poem now...




thank you all ....

thank you..


so all said sweet and uplifting word to me..
i love you all much (wish i could give all hugs and i mean this jee..)

 

[MzMelanie2u2]

OMG...!

Oh My Goodness...I can just imagine you
sitting at a desk and your pen is
moving not skiping a line, and your venting.
Your emotions are flowing like The
Great Mississippi, from your
heart through your arm,
into your hand, and
exiting through your pen and
concluding its expedition on this empty canvas
of paper thats full of possibilities.
I mean, i just feel you all in this.
This is some of the best work
Ive seen....
PLEASE, "KEEP EM COMIN"...1