Black Poetry : Voice to her face pt.III

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Reflection of reaction
    If i were to tell u
    within all that i am
    my zeal for life
    and how u became
    my joy inside as i
    picture ya essence
    rapidly running in waves
    would u laugh or mock me
    my name and heart
    i rest at the four corner stones
    and i cascaded ya love inward
    through dis vision as countless
    days and magical moments go
    slowly by, i pause to think and
    reason why my mind is filled wit
    sweet memories like we met
    my heart doth with love for u
    running deeper into the center
    feaverish rapture turns me inside
    out passion flicks a flame and dis
    bliss of kissing pages lip lock us
    in emotion givin vent to tears
    my body shake at thoughts
    i came from the dream of yester
    year ya sweet juices flava down
    my tongue taste the natar of
    bittersweet the aroma lingers in
    i see ya face and i watch u
    open like a butterfly i saw u
    in my existing factor merely creating
    da sun to dance in the radiant mix
    as we lay comforting beside the
    waters and moving deep inside u
    slowly leaping breaking da walls
    uncaging the flow of womanly
    juices i notice ya toes curls
    and how ya eyez swril back deep
    the feeling of black thunder u filter
    a harvest like autumn rain pouring
    silent soft screams and moaning cries
    my mouth capside to call ya name
    aloud knowing ya mystery will be
    the visional passion overwhelms me
    maybe u can pen a line from the hip
    to reveal ya self, i so loveth u so long
    after all these days of misguiding
    eroticly we met in mixture sexually
    from the walls of my vision yet my
    handz not touch nor my fingertips
    but equally my heart & soul did
    u became my half without doubt
    dis image viewed from afar ya face
    became a blur and the name i tame
    to remember but i know u was a gift
    and to my suprise u rise again giving
    me more and more if in reality u can
    work me surely my heart would follow
    u forever i taste u and da flava of
    buttercream dip in wildberry baked
    tosted to a rumproast a smile cross
    my face as i place u my Queen
    ya nubia soul dash repeatly in flashies
    ya name i shall call out once but
    for now i will leave u inside the shall
    ya a beauty to behold and beloved
    da apple of my life and i so name u
    what u have laid upon me no other
    can touch or am i just blind and
    shaken , love was my only true darkness
    as a man of love ya insensitivities was
    strong i see crystal clear how dear u are
    if u allow me once to cry da name surely
    it will be u i call i place'd u the face & voice
    now the world must know whom u be that
    holds me in depth and spirit as i pen the final
    phase fruitfully and close this visional chapter
    know i call ya name not to ashame nor reveal
    but to show i so loveth my belove and honor
    forth thy Queeneth is my heart
    hope u understand !

    pt.IIII breaks da mystery down as her name is called !
    :spinn: :luv: :spinn:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see ummm hmmmm
    ok wow yes i am speechless this time
    well i just wait on part 4
    cuz this is getting deep
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmmm yes deep and dis vision
    cascading outward to spell out
    but i now placed the face and the voice
    by reasons and i knoweth now the truth
    my heart now speaks seek me in the
    FINAL chapter and know whom she be .
    Thank u Angel for the lovin support to my visional mass
     
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    Brother...you are flooding our souls with this series

    Wonderful river of emotion you've set free here...
     
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    sage my vision has allowed me this
    open door so i pen it to face the voice
    thank u so much for the love & support
     
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    Oh My Goodness! Oh My Goodness!
    King Charming is about to put the glass slipper on his Queen!
    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:

    Breath ladies breath!!!! Phew!!!!

    Awesome scribing Brother Rich!
    And the suspense is all so
    teasing!

    Love the creativity posed
    in your trilogy!!!!!!!
     
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    Rich this is sooo beautifull....I can';t wait to read more
     
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    ummm Rich i always love your visional mass scribes
    cant i get pt 4 now..... :spinn:
     
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    Thankz purplemoons..... u know i'm bot to lace her right .....lol

    thankz swtT.....ya words means a lot and stay tune as pt.4 rolling

    thank ya Angel ......it's coming ! it's coming ! at ya sistah whewww!
     
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    Emotions, flowing like a river, is never a cause for laughter or mockery, but cause for warmth, understanding and knowing the heartfelt words are truly meant. There was such a warmth to this flow, the river truly runs deep.
     
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