Black Poetry : Voice to the face pt.6

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Sweet sacrifice
    perspective color
    rayz of autumn
    shades of brown
    the face is place'd
    i've walk'd six miles
    i heard you just the
    other day in soft whispers
    your words gently touching
    my lips as they tingle
    my heart racing blissfully
    inside my vision a rush of
    exhilaration deep inside me
    amazingly aware of this
    moment so feverish the flood
    of intense passion yet u
    speak of not understanding
    so now i sit and magnified tears
    i've pictured ya beauty and
    visionized the complex weave of
    threads and sew by fabric looming
    now my own senses betraying me
    back to the moment of the last
    soon we shall meet
    not only by reasons but faith
    i've pen this endless love
    that's enchanting, u walked in
    here offering this unconditional love
    see it was u who cared
    willing to share and cross where
    no one dared it was u so i now
    lone to call your name aloud
    i know the secret of u why
    hide what's deep inside i cry
    for the world to know of this love
    but still afraid that when i do
    like before you will leave me
    i have to asure your stay near
    my heart i have pen the face
    i know whom u are the voice
    i know so well you know of me
    but not me , so i open all maze
    and chamber doors to let u roam
    i've vision ya tall frame and the
    way you sway i've pictured us
    under candlelight at night so
    i vow dis beloveth heart unto u
    and i promised self to love you
    and be what you lone to have
    see inside this vision we talked
    sure i'm different , but full of
    affection my body has yearn
    and burn for you , i've written
    you many times speaking in
    side tongue so no one know
    u say i'm free with you
    u told me i'll be loved right
    this heart not in the mood
    for any games , please be real
    coz i feel this need of u but
    unclear and i've taste the
    berries of u now i want to finally
    end this sega of art and poeticly
    be heard but i know ur be no more
    as the mystery continues......... :luvv:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this touch me so deep
    very powerful scribe
    emotions flowing
    for the magic to be so strong...
    i dont think she will leave you
    by your side she will always stand...
    [email protected] rich you after my heart or sumpthin..QQ
    i am so in this flow wow.... :luv:
    i be awaiting pt 7....

    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz angel .......
    as i close my eyes i go deeper
    into the future to visit the truth
    i so will know soon if she do !
    then i will send for her to cometh .
     
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    this is sheer loveliness, baby.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz gempis as i cross the jade with my spade
    and bring out the face .......stay tune !
     
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    Awww! so sad and
    yet so beautiful!

    I'm betting that she
    already knows!

    Wanna put some
    money on it!

    I'm taking bets if
    anyone wants in!!

    Very intriquing flow!
     
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    Rich.....(silent applause) :hot: :hot:
     
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    thankz purplemoons .......i'll take a bet it will be ???
    this mystery will open up with a wild bang to shock the room.

    sensualReality thank u so much and the visit inside the voice to face
    the name is on the tip of my tongue will i tell it next to be seen.
     
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    You say she speaks of not understanding, but perhaps does, but is speaking in a hush of mystery like you do so, so well. Your senses haven't lead you astray. She sounds shy, but true love speaks out, so in that, there's nothing to fear. Just like the other additions to the series, this is soul stirring.
     
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    This series is tight my brother I'm feeling ya vibe... :book:
     
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