Black Poetry : Voice to her face pt.II

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The Elegance of solitude
    it's my only wish
    my only love
    da cool embrace
    become my only desire
    like paper chase a true
    comfort facing the voice
    everytime you appear
    you became a part of me
    my life and deep into my
    humble soul,I can no longer
    bare the silents i so had
    cherished
    the yousts in you & to the
    rectius you turn within me
    through ya eyes u mass deep
    into my soul telling me da full
    extension of ya love & pleasure
    through the helm of ya handz
    you write the depth of reasons
    i lay to a vision to face the voice
    of sweet soft caramel mixed in
    milk chocolate and a smile to light
    up orbit ur like da odessy freestyle
    and da reflection of compassion
    so blissful , i've called u many times
    i now know your inside me , my tongue
    speaketh words you renounced and
    it send me into a tempo heighten
    my heart yearns intensely for affection
    anticipation erotic portrait occupy
    my deep vision erratically, as you enter
    da images creep beyond the face
    as the voice echos my name in black ink
    deception shadows flames but perception
    of glare desires beckoning me deeper
    ya name is cloudy but thy face linger
    thee voice echoing in whispers i know of
    and stain my heart i so loveth u so long
    yet thoughts of love revolve shyly
    my eyez light up :luv: and flirtation :flirt:
    set off a massive fire to a dynasty of bliss
    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
    I've watch u
    and felt u
    ya words leak
    deep inside me
    line by line as
    i vision u again & again
    u know not of my heart
    but u know i am . :spinn:
    so i pen my love & soul to
    a scribe u can vibe into
    and read me to know i do
    exist. :look:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok [email protected] again
    your pen is hot with love
    and i am so feeling it
    can i may i just have a little more of this
    love it!!!! you know where its going Right...:wink:

    Angel
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u sistah Angel ...........
    my vally to pen the voice
    to the face within da visional
    cast i sit in comfort inside my
    own existing watch as a paper
    chaser to da love i vow .......
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am speechless, gee....wow...But I'll try to do this some justice.
    Dripping
    from within
    ink from pen
    essence floating
    again, and again
    words embrace
    the images
    of a face
    as the tender
    words trace
    what the mind
    can't possibly
    erase
    These words
    just a taste
    of what lies
    within......

    Just had to add a tiny drop, this was...poetry at its finest.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed sistah ! no sweat flow
    and thank u so much as i pen
    the voice to face bring light
    on the mystery love stay tune pt.III :devil:
     
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    beautiful finish Rich:)
     
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    thankz swtT.............yet it's far from ova
    my vision is deep and long so i still sing da song
    stay tune for pt.III
     
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    You create a masterful vision of love, my dear. Lookin forward to part 3.
     
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    thank u as my vision took my love
    into a passion and da face i place'd
    beside me making love and i ask to
    rename her and reveal her stay tune
    FINAL chapter in creation class !

    gempis ya one of a kind ya know thankz for the support
     
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    and this...
    even more beautiful...
    you can feel this piece...
    really....Wonderful flow Rich!
     
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