Black Poetry : Voice to the Face pt.7 (7th vow)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Nubian Visional structure
    as my body now in rupture
    from the golden tresses
    and flowing nappy hair
    perfect face & voice of care
    skin brown she humble ware
    generous mouth words 2 bare
    full lips round tender hips
    long smooth legs & ample bust
    bedroom eyez dat screams
    out in lust
    deep emotions cross in waves
    a queen my body crave
    i lone to holla her name
    in a twisted world made of sin
    inside the vision a place
    now called where running cars
    and big shopping malls
    she sway and move within i see
    it's like a picture for every moment
    and a memory to every picture
    yet i look inside this vision
    and take all da submission
    1) vow is ya radiant smile reflecting
    the glory held solely by da heavens
    2) vows of your affectionate compassion
    in the beautiful ways ya heart brings
    3) vows is the diamond sparkle u pose
    so skin deep dat leave's a warm shine
    4) vows is the writting u leave upon my
    face and mind i so treasure
    5) vows is da secret of love inside da
    atmospheric need for me as i'm of u
    6) vows of my song i sing dat dazzle deep
    with undeniably senses of a closure but
    yet leave a fragrance
    and thy;
    7th vow to uncover the mask to the voice
    i so made the choice but to reveal da thriller
    is sub-du under the special passage in heart
    as i vow from da soul inside da pits of my body
    i de-nounce u my beloveth, i ask in honor of ya
    soul and i respect in da depth of ya heart to
    pro-name u my queeneth , not by showcase
    but from loveth i scream to open the book to
    thy world before us and leave the mark of whom
    u be and yore reason kept so long
    i vow unto u unconditional love
    and treasure all your womanly soul
    as i comfort ya beings in my heart
    i so love u and care with extreme measures
    i know u can fulfill my desires of pleasures
    i place the face from vision to vioce i hear
    i watch ya pen , felt ya words, tame me
    kissed ya thoughts for months and months
    my blood set off an explosion eroticly
    our tyme has come dat we meet on the bridge
    where love walks and venture inside the garden
    as i vow my heart, body and soul
    u may not hear me but deep u know i am
    from da vision i now make reality
    her name is ........ O' behold i wait until the day
    and poeticly spray it as u ask u too wish i do so
    but i have yet unfold the total mystery
    u shall be in final chapter next to the last word
    i vow
    :heart: :luv: :heart: :luv: :luvv: :luv: :heart: :luv: :heart:
    :hot: :jumping: :hot: :jumping: :hot: :jumping: :hot: :jumping: :hot:

    I can't hold it , i'm burning and jumping to scream da name!
     
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    well now so be thy vows
    this was a lovely flow
    so be call thy name
    for love have found what you seek
    and poeticly spray and unfold the mystery
    very warm scribe
    i can feel the passion you have for your Queen
    awaiting the final piece
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    thankz sistah Angel ...............
    i now knoweth her and whom she be
    by name to the face of da voice
    intense mystery i uncovered
    soon to nounce thy Queeneth in honors
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i hope so..
    ...the reading is good..
    but my patience welll...\

    keep flowing
     
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    deepy u something else u know dat !.....lol
    it's so intense and full of who til i'm going nuts
    thankz sistah for the 7th visit whewwww!!! :nuts: :hammer:
     
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    All i can say $$Rich$$ baby is keep flowing cuz u as well r impressin the heck out of me. Keep doin the dang thang. :spinn:
     
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    BlatinaPoet4u................wow!
    thank u so much from my heart
    it's da art of vision & desires mixed with da heart & emotions
    to bring the face out and the reality of truth so i continue
    poeticly reaching deeper ya words has made my day !
    thank u ,thank u ,thank u !!
     
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    Rich you're killin' it softly:wink:
     
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    no problem rich. U made my day too. :spinn:
     
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    u know sensualReality my poetic vision is at this zone
    where i see it before me to pen down as da face in vows
    ready to be named thanks sistah

    Blatina...happy u can feel my vibe and it gave a sparkle today
    thank u again much love from da heart as the mystery continues
     
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