Black Poetry : Thoughts of An Abused Wife....

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  1. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lauryn Hill once sang, "Killin me softly',
    but not only are you killin me with words,
    but actions, I am not going to take it anymore.....
    Tell me you don't love me and I will leave..
    ...Tell me that I am not the one and
    I will understand..... Why me? There is so many others
    out there wanting you but you happen to be here with me.
    Maybe I am scared of the thought of true love..
    Me in love? No question is What is love?
    I can handle being in love but how can I be,
    if I exactly don't know what it means truly.
    Love....... what a word! Four little letters
    that brings such humor and yet heartache....
    You tell me to relax....Relax.......How?!
    I tried to be your wife, friend, and lover but you use me
    everyday to your advantage and pleasure.
    I am not going to take it anymore....
    Yes....... I am your wife....
    but ****... when can I be actually your wife?
    Everday I am here for you and give you my shoulders,
    while you push me around emotionally and mentally...
    Man...... where is the love you promised my parents you
    will always give..... So..... I guess you are just suppose to be here sexually........That's funny..... the sex isn't hot, never was, I love you for you being you, never judged you by the sex.
    If I ever did....... Holla, brotha!!! Hello....exes!!!
    Tell me what you want to do......til then..... my heart
    is hurting....please stop what you are doing!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word.............. feelin' dis been on this ride once
    the motions
    da wordz
    one's heart
    da feelings
    killing me softly i know da math of dis emotional caper
    tyte scribe
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you guys.
     
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    wow i enjoyed this, its deep, totally takin advantage of the love....this is too familiar......:toast: :toast: :toast:
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Da1whoownslife, very emotive piece, to frequent of an occurrence, being killed softly.........the worst kind of death.

    True flow,
    angelic
     
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    Hey Da1whoownslife
    feeling you on this
    much love:heart:
    Peace
     
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    wow... d*mn wow...
     
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    This is a straight-up liberation call, run (for help) while you can!
     
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