Black Poetry : THE THIRD COMMANDMENT

[Desert Storm]

You feel me?

Gurl, speak on it some 'mo

Desert Storm

 

[MRS. LADY]

Thou shall not take the Lord
Thy Gods' name in vain...

this poem is not really about me...
it really is about word play...

when you say the words "I am".....
the next word is associated to God

so if you follow I am with something negative..
it is exactly what u are....

God is good
I am good

God is the light
I am the light

I feel angry..
I feel tierd...
I feel negative today...

but I will never say..

I am these things...

Because God is good always!

 

[FattnBeautiful]

Beautiful write with a great flow. We are who we are.
I enjoyed reading this.