Black Poetry : Students of "The Bottom", a Sixth Grade Primer

[watzinaname]

A lot better huh? Well, anything can be improved upon, some things take more effort than others. Thank you for your support on this piece khasm.

 

[Ireadastory]

You know this piece is so real to me, because in my part of the woods we have a section called "the bottom" too and everything that this piece is speaking of happens in our section too. What is really sad is that some of the young folks wear the nickname "the bottom" like a badge as if something to be proud of because for them they either don't know, don't care or can't see a better way. Great drop waiting for part two.

 

[watzinaname]

Nothing wrong with not being ashamed of where you're from, but if you're proud because of the negative things that happen in the bottom as well, then that is a problem. Thank you for your support Ireadastory.