Poetry Critiques : From The Bottom

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dlovely, Jan 7, 2006.

  1. Dlovely

    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who Killed him, who shot him i don't know, cause I'm from the bottom. Drugs and gun's and jail bonds,cause I'm from the bottom.It's hard in the hood everyday,young people losed off the Mary J. , some still losed till this very day cause I'm from the bottom.Rocks, stars , and cop cars,when you in the bottom.Drunk men and crack heads,begging just to get in. But this is the end in the Bottom.Gold diggin chicken heads,trying to sKime for a dollar,but that's the way these low down women do it down here in the bottom.But we live our life to the fullest,day by day in the BOTTOM>>>
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice but jammed up ......keep doing it laying it down
     
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