Poetry Critiques : From The Bottom

[Dlovely]

Who Killed him, who shot him i don't know, cause I'm from the bottom. Drugs and gun's and jail bonds,cause I'm from the bottom.It's hard in the hood everyday,young people losed off the Mary J. , some still losed till this very day cause I'm from the bottom.Rocks, stars , and cop cars,when you in the bottom.Drunk men and crack heads,begging just to get in. But this is the end in the Bottom.Gold diggin chicken heads,trying to sKime for a dollar,but that's the way these low down women do it down here in the bottom.But we live our life to the fullest,day by day in the BOTTOM>>>

 

[$$RICH$$]

nice but jammed up ......keep doing it laying it down